I write rapist You think that really means shit to me? No. I liked the flow of the ist and I just decided on rapist You think that means I enjoy going around and raping shit? Uh no. the name means nothing to me. I'm not trying to be a dick but you're hurting these people by telling them shits good That b was whack. and yeah we are right I'm not a dick I'm just trying to help these people No one responds to me being nice except maybe janek and a few other people cus I know they'll take my crits and turn it into something positive. until all of you learn to to take mine and other peoples shit to heart we're going to be a dick Alot of us have been writing for years we now what's wrong and what's right what's good and what's not you don't. get over it. Maybe when you know what we know you'll be in my position and understand. so let's just leave it at that Listen to those that are better than you and don't bitch Every time I've ever bitched about crits I've been completely wrong These people know what they're talking about you guys should realize that. /endrant
thats what i said a ways back, but if it's anything like then some douche will be like "didnt read too long"... it's like those talent shows, everyone gets pissed when your not jerking them off when you've heard cats fuck with more harmony. when i get crits I use them to my advantage. so should you. be happy someone bothers to help. and learn to take criticism. ridiculous.
I don't like the R in the first one, and the F is out of place in the second one, but they're dopeskis. and cholo font ftw
to all you kiddies out there.this foo knows whats up when it comes to handies.listen to em.b.s. police too...
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Swob looks ok. That S is over used. seven fiver I just dont like your name way to long Dont just bump your stuff to get crits give crits to get them
swine - try and make the I go better with the W and N kre - mess with the s to get rid of the space between it and the w sevenfiver - the second one looks like shit, first one isn't that great either but i like the flow, maybe make the IV look less like an N. bigblue - i like the EARN tag, but not the rest. i ahve no idea what kind of style you are going for though, so i can't really crit it. switched the t with a c for more flow, don't know if im gonna keep it though. [Broken External Image]:http://i596.photobucket.com/albums/tt45/actr_2009/acer.jpg
yea ut useually dose flow alot better but when your doing the scratchys with mad heads you kinda go fast but yea thanks...
Acer - Change the A a little bit to match the other letters. It looks good though. Lucifer - Maybe try rounding your letters a bit more.
crits? acer- i think that is was it says. try and make the a more ledgeable lucifer- looks okay for just fucking around.