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Freestyle Rapping

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. Atomik

    Atomik Senior Member

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  2. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    Yo, I'm on more drugs then the ones that moderate
    Gotta keep it changin' up, son I gotta modulate
    Conglomerate, a collection of idiots on the internet
    Who pride themselves on meme's and 4chan intellect
    S'all good though, it's all sunshine like Slug said
    Gonna kill me, cuzz, don't you know I was dead?
    How many can really talk about keepin' it real
    When for the past month I haven't eatin' a meal
    Sick and sadistic, where'd you pull them statistics
    Rip shit, intrinsic, got more class then physics
    Hopin' to blow up like a dud firecracker
    Holdin' up a cardboard sign sayin "for hire rapper"
     
  3. Loki X Sho

    Loki X Sho Banned

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    Eel Kid, please go read a book and expand your vocabulary before you flap your jaw my way.
     
  4. Loki X Sho

    Loki X Sho Banned

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    I hate working. Scratch, I hate working for this corporate clone. If I had my own choice I'd be sketching home alone cause I dont want to be a part of something I dont have the heart for. If you give me two more weeks I guarentee i'll be out that door, ready to explore cause my mind is a well full of colors and thoughts, and If I dont let em flow I'll surely get caught doin something I cant stand, instead of using my hand to meet my minds demands and putting it on god knows what just to expand. I poured a cereal box of stress into the trash this morning, cause I'm all fed up with the bullshit stories. I watched the faces in the marshmallows morph from something bright to the dullest of the dull, like the darkness in the night, but thats alright, its good to break free, from the overwhelming demands of this society, and I try to do my best, but everyone keeps tryin ta break me, ignoring my own style, they keep trying to create me, and thats the main thing. You can break an artists strive to make her due and be alive...to do her best and still survive among the rest who protest her vibe. Its an open dive into free falling everywhere, you take a step off the ledge and you stop to look and stare, but where to go, and what to do, you havent felt this way since 8/2, and its bound to do something if you arent staying true to the nothings in your head that make you. They may be nothings to them, but I cant help but say screw them...because every branch forms a new stem, free their minds like Abraham Lincoln, and do the haters a favor, and but out your own flavor...they can eat it up and you'll chew them up, and victory you'll savor...just save your best for later, when you prove to them you're greater.
    aka, I am sick of people telling me whats up, cause I have divine reasoning, I drink from my own cup, your cup has a mix of deadly seasoning, to spring me from my mind state, and to put me into yours, to make what I love doing into everyday chores ...Im not here to follow what you do, so I suggest to your own guns is where you should stick to. I'm too into, independence, and conquered masterpieces, and I'll stick to it before my creativity decreases.


    I am a joke, full of fucking laughs and smiles for miles. If you emptied my head you'd have pot by the piles. ohhhhhzzzyeahz..haha Im not hatin...if you can flow what you write then its all good.
     
  5. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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    my grey matters a source for tears,
    wen im dropin bombs like north korea,
    and wen i battle i pause careers
    my vocabs a cause of fear,
    penatrates ur mental,
    like i forced a spear,
    then a steak in ur tempal,
    u rap bout guns but neva braught one here,
    u remind me of why i shouldnt talk to queers
     
  6. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    its the return of the lyrical voodoo curse 3D spherical,
    nurse your wounds between verses its the hear-a-who miracle,
    got 5 on the itchy trigger finger, snitches linger,
    malevolent ideas lead to bitches left in ditches, no ringer.


    Leadin small children down the path of least resistance,
    contributing wholeheartedly to the penance of your existence,
    distance? nah, im feelin persistent today,
    In the race for mighty Babylon, ***** i demand a raise!

    Rehearse this verse to reverse this hearse
    immerse yourself in the free verse adverts,
    become one, traverse the city streets and thug purses
    all you wanted was a little chunk and perverse firsts

    i have no idea where im going with this
     
  7. reallythough

    reallythough Senior Member

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    ooooooh i get it you are supposed to be like... aesop rock.. and only "real hip hop heads' feel the flow.

    loki send me something recorded.. still.
     
  8. graffdabusup

    graffdabusup Senior Member

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    fuckin genius...
     
  9. Nem

    Nem Elite Member

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    if youre gonna hate at least spit some...
     
  10. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    You people be dissin, but you get up on the mic, you choke up
    You think you married to the game, hell no you broke up
    No weight, you better cop up
    Yeah you all gangsters, then please, put your glock up
    If Loxi's rhymes was looks
    She be Jessica Alba butt naked on the bed
    But you know I turn her into Lela Star instead
    But for real, mad props for rippin' this thread.
     
  11. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    i developed techniques for gun enlargement
    now my shit's too big for the glove compartment
    so drama queen emcees that love to start shit
    get found face down with their blood on the carpet
    bludgeon your carcass. ditched in the lake
    i call your bitch little debbie cause she's getting me cake
    do i break her off some? pshh... give me a break
    she's kinda big and i think she should be slimming her waist
     
  12. BigBlueViolence

    BigBlueViolence Elite Member

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    That whole little debbie shit had me rollin, dude.
     
  13. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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  14. ESKiMO2

    ESKiMO2 Elite Member

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    My rhymes are fat, like lines from a fat cap
    I take you back like a '94 boom bap track
    Montana gold & black, are the cans I rack
    Strapped with a back pack, just roaming the train tracks
     
  15. 1stGu32.wh0?

    1stGu32.wh0? Senior Member

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    me and the nose knows wassup yall is some tards eatin playdo
    type to fuck around under the sink and drink draino
    im after fat sacks of cash and fat ass like jay lo
    i wanna be first so i take out all of the above like maino
    i eat emcees and squash beef like potatoes
    spittin tornados givin flight to wayne winnebago
    storms form the fuego to retire the best and take they bank rolls
    yall some minicher pinchers bitin ankles
    get the fuck off my swag get to shakin like bojangles
    i spit acute angles that split fades and leave bitch made haters mangled
    who wanna tangle?
    knot you..
     
  16. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    Knot me?
    Man what kind of fucking wordplay is that
    It seems like you in fucking preschool, face it your whack
    Sure my vocab aint the highest calibur
    But I spit real shit, you just a competitor
    You aint even freestyling, you fuckin' gaylord
    You probably spend 5 minutes on each line staring at your keyboard
    Come to grips, you cant spit it orally
    And what the fuck, C4NT Y0U SP3LL N0RM4LLY?!
     
  17. sketch_three

    sketch_three Banned

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    that had less flow than the popes period
     
  18. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    Are you serious?
    That shit flowed maddddddd nice
     
  19. BATER

    BATER Senior Member

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    in all honesty i don't know how to rhyme but i think its time to unveil your slime
    everyone on this thread thinks they know how to flow its just a show
    they think their studs but when it comes to graff their just duds
    all these online geeks try to spit some shit to loki sho trying to be her foe but they don't know she can snort some blow and spit some flow
    i'm not here to defend or put an end to the drama in this genre
    all i want is to observe all this beef that stews while i drink some brews sniff some coke and read till you choke
    pretty soon i'll end this rap and get some paint toss it in a basket rack it and go paint some hood cause i'm in the mood to go over your pussy shit graff and then toss you in a casket
    my raps ain't the best but i put it to the test i infest this thread and wait till you end up dead like a rape victim in a bloody bed
    ...this is the end beautiful end now don't pretend cause you stuff is shit its no wonder what you bit is a victim of the buff and i've had enough!
     
  20. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    Wow another kindergarden student tryin to rhyme
    Face it kid, isnt it passed your bedtime?
    Your opinion here is outdated
    While my shits so ill I gotta be sedated
    And what the fuck is a dud
    You gotta stop using a rhyming dictionary bud
    You know I spit it straight whiteboy swag
    You shit dont flow at all like a robot with a lag
    How about you put graff on the side for a minute
    And comes to grips, you suck dick just admit it
    And at least you know your raps aint the best
    Cause I surely wasnt impressed, it shows you just a guest


    for real though that end of that Loki line flowed mad nice.