good but i you have 3-d on the top there wouldn't be any on the bottom [Broken External Image]:http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/1802/feqcw.jpg
piece [Broken External Image]:http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/1093/simplepiis.th.jpg wilder toyshit ;D [Broken External Image]:http://img193.imageshack.us/img193/1502/wilderpiis.th.jpg Is my piece at least ok?, i know the other is wack as hell.
ok, everything is disproportionate, sloppy and just plain bad stop now and do simple blockletters stop trying to make it look like graffiti and make it look like letters
did these last night at like 3am lol may do a name change to , to noise so i did a lil sketch crits please
Of course I offer my crits as well... ''anarone''- im feeling the peice with the blue 3d and red outline however, U might wanna make the letters a little thicker, but if your trying to develop a certain style like that, by all means go for it, I would love to see how it turns up later. ''MaterStainers''- Im really feeling your style, put some color into that and post it! ''Kaiser71''- your shit is sick! ''whahappen''- Like slip said, make it thicker and tighten it! look around, and see the throws from more experienced artist, then compare it to yours and make corrections. ''Eack''- Keep that shit up, looks good man. ''remos''- I like that wise peice but W is way to that fuck out there, bring it closer with the other letters and your good. ''klic''- good shit bro. let me see your other stuff. ''Aseir''- Im really feeling the norse throw up in the 2nd peice, and the last peice is sweet! ''deco one''- Everything looks clean except for that arrow on the far right, it kinda looks like a penis. lol ''IKT''- The r and the e are 2 far from the letters, bring em in, and it will look much better. ''DUNSY''- Not bad, just try to make the letters about the same size, ''hpir'' good, practice makes perfect! ''kakajun''- stick to simples for now. ''kidreny!'' - I love the colors scheme on the first one! the letters look dope 2! CRIT ME PLEASE! GOOD SHIT EVERYBODY, KEEP IT UP!
best i could do at the moment, hopefully u see what i'm getting at [Broken External Image]:http://img198.imageshack.us/img198/1130/trstygtrr.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0607091636.jpg Kem- Nice start man Noise- Same as Kem, nice
noise- its a good start kem- same as noise zarb- not really digging the attachment on the 'e' and I'm not a fan of the way you attached your letters, but besides that, pretty good simple top 1 is wack, i know (colored it with crayolas too lol) bottom 1 just a rough sketch, messed up 3d but you get the general look of it..
what the fuck are you serious right now ruk just did that shit you cant bite make something else up and dont do it yet bc your simples arent good enough and your shadeing looks like you tryed to mix 3d with it