What's it say?

 

crits?
cybe- go more simple
cesk- make it legible. i cant read that for the life of me

 

As much as I like you, I'm gonna have to be blunt.


I can't read it

make your letters bigger

too many dots in one place

simple is better, try keyboard letters

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loose the crazy extensions

 

That's exactly how I felt haha
I was like dammit I don't wana be a dick to a nice guy :/

 

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...should i try and go simpler?

 

to be honest i like your stickers a hell of alot better.

 

Expo- Hmm Guess I just saw you on here wiring expo at the wrong time I guess

Cesk- Love the handy, just make it bigger and more legible.

 

yes.. here is my handy (on the run's dont really work too well on wood..)

 

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yeah i'd go simpler.. just try and get some flow, see if you can join up the letters to get it looking all fancy like..

 

Crits?

 

ASTAR.DWSP- The A and the S look good, but after that it looks like it blobs up too much and turns into mush. Is that a meanstreak? What did you mean by the "otr not good on wood"?

Syhe- I've gotta disagree with you on the "connecting letters" and more flow crits. Trying to make the tag wild and connecting the letters will probably just make it turn into shit. And why did you say go simple, but then tell him to connect letters and go fancy? Those kinda contradict eachother ya know.

Shruk*n- Just keep it simple, style and flow will soon follow.

 

BUMPITTY BUMPITTY bump. crit me so i can stfu =)

 

The first one looks better to me, but the name is probably played out

This pic is for the TAG not the throwie

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MES like error was saying that swirl definitely adds some flavor to that tag. keep playing wit it

 

Mes- I really like that handy. It's good and simple.
Scyn- Just keep on working on those letters. Put some flow into it.

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Not my best but I'm itching for some opinions.

 

I dig it, man.

I've been fucking around with some shit like that recently

 

I really like that shit BigBlue. You should keep developing that. All I would say is try to steer away from cursive too much.

 

That's supposed to be cursive, my man.

Nothing wrong with a classy hand every once in a while

 

Didn't mean ta diss ya man. I thought it was your regular handie.