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Freestyle Rapping

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    Lyrical guillotine chokes straight crushin your throat
    No visual joke, those who provoke will soon soak
    You have awoke, the one that use oak for his strokes
    Never misspoke, all I hear from you is a croak
    Im ready to smoke, so I roll a blunt then toke
    Your soul is revoked, and then scrambled like yolk
    Call me the Raw Throat, as I promote my poisonous qoutes
    Your rank I demote, as I use my rhymes just to gloat
     
  2. DeeSquared

    DeeSquared Senior Member

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    you shoulda just shut the fuck up and went back to beatin off you lil fagit

    Check it stay blazed aint shit always actin hard
    he needs to go back home and work out his other arm
    he aint nothing but punk ass poser
    givin up neck for a quarter
    so he can go and buy another hot dog for his shrine of ben holter
    get the fuck you stupid prick
    quit doing what you do and go suck a dick
    youll make more money doin that then what you do right now
    just get the fuck out and keep your fagit ass head down
     
  3. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    Just bumpin' some beats tonight, bored as fuck..

    yo, if you ever see me, dressed up scummy with my bum ass
    please give a little bit of money and don't try to run past
    it hurts my feelings
    even though im dealing, bringin' nothin back aint appealin
    it doesn't matter now, BOOM SMASH
    hit you with the shopping cart i push around, too bad
    now you got no choice but to hang with me
    got no fuckin' choice but smoke this thang with me
    i wanna get to know ya, get inside ya head, know what you about
    you aint gotta be bothered by that rag over your damn mouth
    or the chloroform that's soakin and sinkin in
    from the cracks on your lips, your pours and all over your freakin' skin
    now you passin out, and i'll carry you away
    this just another one of those Small Time days.


    *now with poormans copyright

    I'ma fuck with this.
     
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  4. hasemler

    hasemler Senior Member

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    heres that next level shit:

    its hard waking up when your purpose seems weak
    and your perspective feels so damn bleak
    like oh my god some clarity is what i seek
    like my lenses are dirty
    or my visions sixty thirty
    and sometimes i wish i wasnt knowing
    and my mind wasnt growing
    but these struggles keep me going
    day in and day out
    feeling complete insanity
    tied down to humanity
    trying to disprove fate
    in this sprawling urban landcsape
    looking for a remedy
    or an ability
    to defy inevitability

    fuck these everyday concerns
    and the holes that they burn
    in my mind as i learn
    the voices that probes
    past my earlobes
    causing strain in my lymph nodes
    driving through my vains running black like roads
    rushing past my nose
    toward south
    and out my mouth
    pouring out like a spout

    trivial concepts
    of a shattered past
    surfacing too fast
    into a crushing relapse
    you say its nothing kid, perhaps.


    who's feelin' it?
     
  5. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    As I kick back and inhale, I spit rhymes to impale
    Flowin like gale, I'm known to always prevail
    Leavin bodies in bales, sendin 'em off on the rails
    Exhalin the failed, They whole family left paled
    The walls of the home, I scaled, then the bodies left nailed
    No trace or no trail, My murderous services always for sale
    My mode is Constant Assail, you seem to always be frail
    I step on you, Snail. you left crushed, not even no chance to flail
     
  6. hasemler

    hasemler Senior Member

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    my power surpasses
    the need to appeal to the masses
    my words flow the fastest
    when yours run dry like mollases
    in through the ears
    out through the asses
    shatter the lenses in the frames of your glasses
    my thoughts pour into your very soul
    and make you lose control
    your peace in mind is what i stole
    you lose everything you own
    and findout it was all one big loan
    and thats the price you pay
    a strong swift strife
    of words that cut sharp like a knife
    for attempting to live a carefree life.

    ive heard a thousand ryhmes
    a thousand times
    again again i recieve
    and through my ears they weave
    leaving a little memory before they leave
     
  7. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    Shaolin attacks, samurai swords leavin ya neck partially attached
    Had no chance to react, Blood ends up spillin all over ya custom fitted cap
    Lyrically unmatched, MC's get ripped apart by my lyrical darts
    Silenced weaponry, no time for you to scream in the dark
    What you should know is that I'm really hear just to impart
    But those that can't learn are straight losin they heart
    Your spine starts shakin, when you hear my Pitbull bark
    Forced to depart, then I'm quick to sink your ark
    Ya last vision of me is a spark, cuz I'm fast to pack the pipe
    As well as fast to light, cuz the lighter is attached to the mic
    I'm also fast with the swipe, that'll leave ya face with a stripe
    Every blow I throw is a strike, and on the end of my fist is a spike
    Shit, With the words that I type, I could kill you, your children, as well as your wife
    My Words of Advice, don't entice the Precise, thats concise with the vice
    That dont think twice to excise, with that surgical splice
    And re-pack with dry ice, to keep discreet in the heat
    Can't compete, you retreat, when you greet my fleet
    An act of deciet, after the concrete, the back of ya head meets the cleat
    And thats on repeat, to any of those that try to rhyme over beats
    You'll just get added to the heap, of those with the weak physique
    When I reap, I seem to seep, into the chambers in which you sleep
    Ya dreams become bleak, Unsheath, then I tweak ya oblique
    A sleek sneak, as I speak over meek, I wreak
    Unique Mystique, reek a poisonous fog, right over your creek
    When I reach the peak, I take you out with a sweep
    And to test how my mountain is steep, I listen all the way till the end of your leap.....
    ....splash!
     
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  8. dontlisten

    dontlisten New Member

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    yo,when i look around i see we got pigeons whose tattoos be lookin' like christians' greed,
    man we got the wrong seed, and whatever else they can get their greedy hands in, cans in, the cancer has been found in,
    your soul but of course you don't care, keep sold, or keep solid turns it gold.
    Makes it shine see i've got mine still they'll seduce ya' like fine wine.A girl to dine,
    with a booty of a different kind, she stops time, she's gone, now you're slapped back into line.
    woken up from the day you could have swore this was aligned.
    like prisoners who be comin' out christians.
     
  9. Vitamin THC

    Vitamin THC Senior Member

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    im sittin on my bed it's 6 a.m,
    and im just wonderin who the fuck i am
    listenin to nothin shit i think ill come up with somethin
    it might be cuz im lyrically criminal,
    my rhymes are minimal sort of subliminal
    a mixed up message an u dont know what the rest is
    but nothin like you seen before
    liquid inspiration just a blunt n a two four
    its late monday night
    went to the bar and now i cant see right

    now im goooan go to bed peace !
     
  10. Snowmonkey117

    Snowmonkey117 Member

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    everyone is good at rapping on the interent =D
     
  11. KidReny!

    KidReny! Senior Member

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    idk if anyone heard of this song but i thought we start a series of it
    aiight its called "My Dick" use my lyrics as an example

    My dick gets bigger by the hour
    Yo dick is weak like a flower

    My dick is bigger than your momma
    Yo dick is darker than obama

    My dick shoots cum like a oozie
    Yo dick looks a lil woozie

    My dick bigger than rosie odonnel
    Your dick got touched by mcdonald

    My dick can be seen from space
    Yo dick look like it got erased

    My dick make the bitches wanna scream
    Yo dick make the bitches wanna leave

    My dick get invited to all the parties
    Yo dick is avoided my shawties

    My dick get into any girl
    Yo dick make the bitches wanna hurl

    My dick killed 5 chicks
    Yo dick touched 27 dicks

    My dick got its own label
    Yo dick gets fapped under the table

    My dick look like Hulk Holgan
    Yo dick look like Gary Coleman
     
  12. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    yo, you couldnt beat me if i were your meat B.
    You couldnt win if you spit the same rhymes in the same line at the same time.
    Matta a fact any rhyme cause their all mine.
    I been in this game for awhile, long before you started when you got old enough to watch 8 mile.
    My lyrics are like a well constructed mansion yours are just a pile n you in denial. You needa face the music.
    You nothin but a useless nucanse but maybe thats just my 2 cents.
    But ask around n get the same result, steady rippin crew in half like the hulk. So kick rocks niggy go sulk, before i pound your rap game to a pulp and bring your whole show to a halt. Cant be murked, but i can be hurt. Only take 6 grenades, 3 AK's, 12 rockets and a hemophrodic chimp in a skirt. Face it im bizerk, heavy breathin and steady cleavin, dont let the berreta clip you when you leavin, leave you cease to be breathin, im OG you still teethin. Cmon man all your doin is bleedin. Im on the run, wanted for treason and hunting emcees in duck season, dont need to rhyme with reason it just flows. Bringin tornadic destruction but it never blows, only grows to catastrophic perportions, pissin people off like abortion. but dont get it distorted, i went crazy from all the coke i never snorted. Now how would you like your body parts sorted?

    Bitches.
     
  13. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    My dick is a chick magnet
    your dick has grown stagnent

    lulz
     
  14. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    Bumpidge of ye olde post


    Im back and im a BEAST
    I kill rabid animals just to steal thier teeth,
    Attach them to dentures and go on adventures
    Bitin old people and children alike
    Now that what i call a nature hike
    Cannaballistic and malicous
    Covered in blood walkin round lookin suspicious
    but the cops dont stop, im too viscous
    to raw n to real, even the illest couldnt diss this.
    Chewed through my muzzle so you could kiss this
    like Hannibal Lector, Sippin no sizzurp just blood lust nector
    Rippin juggulars with my jaws no problem with metal detectors
    Where was i last tuesday? I was fuckin your wife Mr inspector
    I ate the evidence so you got no case.
    Small children and chicken have the same taste.
    but old people resemble wheat paste.
    yup im sadistic, but lets be realistic
    Youll find no bullets when victims limbs are sifted
    when i get on the mic i leave emcees larynx twisted and their girlfriends fisted
    So what ever you do you don't wanna be shit listed
    and dont say anything else cause the crowds favor has already shifted.
    Never crowd me when im feeling rowdy, cause ill hand out barbituates that leave you feelin drowsy. Dont doubt me, fuck you while you out while lookin at the others wavin howdy.
    I carry out conversations when im bustin a nut, but im only fuckin the lower half of a body so im bustin a gut, give you more sauce than pizza hut when i strut my stuff.
    But im done with the verse havent you had enough?
     
  15. its all good till the cops come

    its all good till the cops come Senior Member

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    mothafuckas should get a map, they gettin lost in they lines
    like they was drivin down an interstate without any signs,
    i keep my lyrics on lock, all of my words are confined,
    to a cell for killin the tracks that i would assign,
    im an accessory for slaughterin a beat like its cattle,
    im wit my army and we win the fight the war and the battle,
    cuz mothafuckaz like to play so they get shook like a rattle,
    im rhymin harder than ridin a fuckin horse with no saddle,
    an transmittin vocal emitions that will raise superstions,
    do whatever the fuck i want its like they gave me permission,
    you wishin that you could top me but all you can do is listen,
    im hookin ya with the flow then pull you in like im fishin,
    i came back like i was missin, but im new to you cats,
    ima do with my lyrics what dcon would do to a rat,
    but we aint rats ***** we dogs and we travel in packs,
    and we attack whether you facin us or turnin ya back,
    an i aint cocky, im jus sicker than an inbred wid aids,
    whos drink was poisioned with raid, watchin an active grenade,
    explode in his face an scatter him all over the place,
    right now im higher than a sattelite thats floatin in space,
    im like a robot that was trapped in a human body thats wired
    to think metaphorically so im able to spit the fire,
    like a mothafuckin dragon son, ya kno im back at it son,
    if ya wanna battle me then take a crack at it son,
    mouth like a pistol when i spit at ya ur ass is done,
    this shit never get old for me because im always havin fun
     
  16. yall heard of me

    yall heard of me Senior Member

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    some stole ass wigger shit skeeeeeeeee
     
  17. its all good till the cops come

    its all good till the cops come Senior Member

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  18. dior

    dior Senior Member

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    your alot better than me at ryming
    trueth is im just sittin hear wastin time and
    i tried to make a ryme but its so bad its like im commiting a crime
    i want to make a call out to yall heard of me
    cus u suck more cock that dr spock does on tv
     
  19. 1stGu32.wh0?

    1stGu32.wh0? Senior Member

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    i got a flow thats doper than Herb n wen i spit i leave ur throat holdin the curb
    like american history x im talkin brutal skits
    your like a nerd fightin chuck norris with judo kicks
    your girl sees my crew and says she knew those dicks
    my crew sees ur bitch and says wed do those chicks
    again cuz aint nothin 2 us we dont fued over clits
    we touch more pussy than tampons or gynochologists
    we blow more money than casino floors with the fans on
    i got the grands on cuz grampz i get my gramz on
    fuck with me and ill let the desert eagle pick your face to land on
    i aint goin no where, im hoover dam strong..
     
  20. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    smoother then cream, and twice as fattening,
    flows heavier then America, what the fuck is happening/
    tell me, what went wrong with this experiment,
    why's he jumpin' off bridges when you double darin' it/
    shakin' your core and all seven of your chakras,
    wish i could make hits when im dead like Pac does/
    brain is fried, must have overloaded on the acid,
    but the opportunity was there and i couldn't pass it/
    now i got this cheap bitch fillin' me with glee,
    takin' her clothes off and feeding me some E/
    this shits great, I fuckin' love being a rockstar,
    while the rest of these cats is pastry, they poptars/
    get it straight, Small Times a Crook with some mad class,
    in fact I got more brains then half the kids in your math class/
    I'm spittin toxious, like my salivas combined with hazmats,
    how many of you cats are gonna chaff my damn ass/
    i can't take it no more, im succumbin to the pressure,
    gotta deal with idiots and the average everyday stressors/
    the monotonies ridiculous, i feel like im mechanical,
    ill do a little damage then im real quick to vanish bro/
    this rhyming shit is easy, how could i not pick it up,
    im sorta like Eminem but i mean it when i say "dont give a fuck"/
    dropped out of school, did drugs out the cabinet,
    thats why im a burn out, never kickin the habit kid/
    inhabitin, every portion of the planets end,
    this what happens when you clashin with manic trends/
    my insides were tore out, my heart is a black hole,
    can never get close to a dude with a black sole/
    people point my direction, some saying "what the fuck",
    like i dont belong here, i can't help it im stuck/
    if you want some drugs then you gotta come get with this,
    ive got it all homie, opiates and barbiturates/
    i wanna get high but the big problem is,
    i checked into narcotics anonymous/

    whatever.