posted thjis in the other thread but i think it fits in here too stayhye-get them letters more loose and dont try and do an extravagant fill till those letters are right
Came back after a short break and there's so much beef in here nowadays, anyway here's a few quick sketches Says tic-toc not tit-tot This is what I write Hearr- nice, i love good simples, only thing bugging me is the connection of the first bar on the w, looks a bit weird, i reckon making it more like the second would be better, it just looks broken and out of place. Also, I was going to say something about the bar going across the a but the more I look at it the more I like it. stayhye- ye, simps are good, take hearrs advice and try clean it up a bit, when you can do them consistently try overlapping them. caer- your stuff is always fire but that big capital E just looks weird
hearr - like it. pm me if you want to exchange. letsgo - like the simples. the P on the last one is nice, but the C and S dont fit in at all. use same sized or similar bars throughout the piece.
haze ur third one is fire the r is legit mer thats legit too but the space on top of the e where theres a gap from the m and r is awkard...u know? delae its simple keep practicing those and add color that cero is clean
Mero - Push the E and R together more. Tic Toc - Your C looks too much like a T in my opinion. Also, work on bars for your last one, since the proportions don't match up. Hearr - Work on your W's and your letter structure. Use bars. Delae - Work on your bars more and more and more. They're good, but you still gotta do some more work. In the right direction, though. For example, your A and E have different bar sizes. Haze - I like the last one the most, but the others look good as well. StayHye - Work on everything. Bars, darker outline, 3D, etc. Work on your letter structure for now, and then work on the 3D. Go simpler.
^^^^^freshhhhhh simple. killamanilla - those are dope too. loving the splatters. crust - im really mixed on it. it looks cool but not really my style, although i can agree that the C looks alot like an S.' mero - ill. the curly off the M is a little bit weird tho.
whoa what the hell is goin on?? these last couple posts are FIRE. keanu come on over to the intermediate thread you too viel
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"final destination" handstyle is dope and the 2 throwies above it. the other ones are eh. [edit] whyd you replace that pink throw with those scribbles? put that shit back on.