[Broken External Image]:http://i207.photobucket.com/albums/bb33/skateboard23/0708092354.jpg B.S - I know your much better then me, but I think theres just too much shit inside it looks alittle messy Nare- Im really likin that only thing i think is the top part of the E doesen't really make sense Reny- Better but I think the balls on R and N look really goofy.
Dude, on the real, you need to start working on your own K, or change your name or something. It doesn't even go with your letters anymore.
[Broken External Image]:http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image567.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://www.bikealbany.com/i/images/image568jqj.jpg ^^i accidently drew the m and the s a bit higher than the a and i... Crits? reny: i like the second one (yellow one), but the balls on the r and n don't really go good there imo. i'd go with the second one in the first pic. zarb: i like it! it says erk right? make the line in the middle of the e (on the left) shorter...
aims you gotta get some flow goin on, and dont try and tweek your bars just yet. and do something with your i on the bottom one, its as basic as it can get
bumpers.... Finally something solid. props homie, this is almost flawless in my book. O is a little bit jumbled but it is clean...
1. don't leave huge spaces between letters. BULE, not B UL E. 2. the face in the E makes it hard to tell if it's an E, or just a C with a face in it. 3.don't make excuses for why your shit doesn't look good. no one sees "toy as fuck" or "drunk as hell" next to a throw and says "oh, it's dope now." 4. make all of your letters a similar size. No fat B, skinny u, long L type deals.
i didnt write toy as fuck that was there when i painted it was next to the one to the left..but thanks for the advice man should i just work on changing my letters or just make them closer
Do both man, progression never hurts. The most important thing is shrinking that B and bringing them together, though.
i dont really like your A, E, or R. your V needs to be cleaned up and your D looks like an out of place O. you should try an find a style thats flows well with the D as well as your other letters.
i cant admit anything until i see a sober throw. for all i kno his drunk throw could be better then his sober one