One thing, though. Your R is missing a good portion of it's leg, and your S is the only letter with an arrow. Those things kind of stand out, in my opinion.
Here's an Egyptian piece from my home town Brisbane maybe you can be inspired. [Broken External Image]:http://file042b.bebo.com/6/large/2008/03/08/10/133035676a7095154286l.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://file039b.bebo.com/9/large/2008/03/08/10/133035676a7095163151l.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://file041b.bebo.com/9/large/2008/03/08/09/133035676a7095138998l.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://file039b.bebo.com/2/large/2008/03/08/09/133035676a7095146502l.jpg
[Broken External Image]:http://i604.photobucket.com/albums/tt126/returned404/piece.jpg Crits: Kaiser- It looks pretty good, if that char was doing something more extreme it would look 10x better Iselldope- why a unicorn? and its feet should be pointed the same way.
unicorns are dope,and no he is laying down,horses lay down like that watch charlie the unicorn on youtube one time and you understand exchange: [Broken External Image]:http://img140.imageshack.us/img140/4417/earn.jpg
looks good for simples ^ some stuff. sorry about the shitty flick [Broken External Image]:http://img194.imageshack.us/img194/8537/photo1taz.jpg
thank you but I disagree with you. I've been on this forum for a few years, keeping quiet most of the time, but i've worked my way up from simples to the point where i dont think i need to keep making straight letters anymore... some older shit from my old name so you see where i'm coming from... View attachment 492220 View attachment 492221 View attachment 492222 View attachment 492223 View attachment 492224 View attachment 492225 View attachment 492226 View attachment 492227 sorry for huge images? i think its time to move on, how else will i learn by doing ONLY straight letters for 3 years? fuck man...
rgb-stop with rgb and start writin seft,do them simples and then try extensions or sumtin but don't go to wild
dont go wild. many of your extensions are no bueno. I would say its time to do more complicated stuff that straight bars but dont jump to far ahead.
yeah sorry your way better, but i see that rgb as a HUGE downgrade go back to what you used to write some of those look really nice