Dad- You've got some stuff.. I'm liking the 2nd, 5th and Last one. Have you thought of coloring the last one?? I'm trying to see what that would look like. Big Blue- School me on those throwies. Even if that drip was an accident I still think it looks good. Safe- that shit is nice Caerte- maybe if you work with less short lines and replaced them with few longer lines it will clean it up a bit(talking from the sketch, your final with the fills looks straight though). Here's some more sketches and working with advice given - work on bars, simps, keyboard letters and a cheep ass throwie(I suck at throwies) Big Ups
iselldope/sak, resize that shit, it is out of control. shell where is your new work? and sorry, i cannot stand that gesus type style
i like the son part but the er thing isn't to good [Broken External Image]:http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/4844/sakexchange.jpg i made this for a girl named gina [Broken External Image]:http://img25.imageshack.us/img25/9780/ginaikr.jpg
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nice u should ad some crazy strars an shit in green on the yellow background and keep the with of ur bars about the same lenght
Big ups on the crits... I'm liking the colors and the drips on the GINA, but that shit is mad huge- its hard to look at. Trying to look at those handstyles at the bottom though. SAKS pretty sick but the A looks kinda squished inbetween the S and K i'd like to see that A just bursting out, like exploding from center or at least consistent with the S at the beginning. Overlapping is nice too. I'm not catching the strars?? -Sketch3