Props. Lots of punks would be all..."HAH, NO0B I DINT BIT THAT! IT'S MY ORIG STYLE!! PWND!" Being influenced by styles of others is another way of learning. No biggie. Slowly you'll develop your own style. Props. Keep it up.
Haven't Sketched in a while do to the fact that my arm is broke.......Or was broke but what ever.......Just tryin somethin different for now, This is a super duper unfinshed roughsketch....But crits? I just did it so give me some feed back [Broken External Image]:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc194/DoubleM41/Graff/scan-2.jpg MS-I crited you in the INter Thread. Kel-Consitincy and coloring work on them Manic- The extra lines aren't need. If you can make a super clean one of those you should do a huge roller with those letters....But just work on cleannes frist. Sprout- No flow, lil things on the M and K arent needed, and your i is covered up a lil too much mabey try a capital one
I actually kinda feel the bottom one...Definetley feeling that R. Both are dope though. EDIT: I do kinda see some places on the bottom one where the shadowing could be tweaked here and there, but It's still my favourite.
the letter structure isnt bad at all. jsut needs a few tweaks on the I. your getttin there man. just remember about the colors.
Trying something different. Crits: Viruz: Finish the shit out of that sketch. That's a dope looking P. M+S: I prefer the bottom D and N, but the top looks better. I don't like the little R though, even though I can tell it's because you lost room. Kelis: As it's been said before, your coloring looks sloppy. I also am not really diggin the I and S. Work on those, but the rest looks solid. JustChillin: Get rid of that throwie. Work on that bottom blockbuster until it's clean, and there are no unnecessary lines. Sprout: You're getting there, keep working those. Slant: I only like a select few of those throwie letters, but for the love of god, forget drawing spray cans. Zof: haha I don't know why you posted in here, but my respect levels went way up for you because of it. In my opinion, the F looks too similar to an P, and I'm not sure if you meant to make the inverted cross in the Baphomet look like the legs to a peace symbol, but if you didn't, it does. Stussy: I think that's the best thing I've seen from you. Ridiculously ill. Zarb: Your letters get way too off-proportion. Work on that, and don't worry about bending kicks on your letters. Crits?
crust are those sharpies? its cool the purple?(violet) doesnt really go with the rest of the color scheme u noe? the u has some whit but none of the other letters do so its awkward to me idk if its just me and my 2 cents but thats my crits =] dine i like both did u only use decos? my latest two need crits: View attachment 495084 i like the bottom one more View attachment 495085
the bottom is way better than top. the thick letters go well with that style. keep it up. for the battle this week. View attachment 495126
dont listin to him he doesnt even paint at all he jus complainz bout his gimp leg cuz hes a bitch a$$ n1gg@ newist sketch gettn payed to do it on mi girlfriends crib
stop getting trolled. it says in parentheses at the bottom (doesn't say anything)... lol. nobody is THAT bad. porno - i like it. great coloring. the r is dope. the highlights look good. there's a lot of extensions, but i like most of them. only one i don't like is the one going through the top of the R. bak - the top one is hot. it would look so dope painted. just work on making your bars the same width. considering a name change for the first time in years. i always draw a good first letter and fuck up the rest. i never take my time on sketches either. [Broken External Image]:http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/4056/1020087.jpg
brok - R is fucked. B 'n K have potential. but styles kinda clash a bit. Keep it up! kolgate - fuck off. diner - coo....off in some places. and the extensions vary A LOT. id get rid of the thing that comes of curl of R and the other thing that pierces it. give N room to breathe. all in all decent. work it. itll be sick.
[Broken External Image]:http://xs136.xs.to/xs136/09094/disappointment292.jpg oh my lanta. has she seen this or are you guna surprise her? if shes seen it you must live in a little country town with no graff or internet what so ever
Mouths- I think that the letters in your piece looks a little too overlapped and the letters gradually rise to the top, try keeping it in a consistent row for now- Im not too sure what it says. Brok- thats good for a quick sketch Porno- Im diggin that flava, I think it would looks sick if the bars were more the same size all the way through- I think there's a noticeable difference between the bars in the E and R as compared to the bars in the I and N Bak- In the second one the 3d looks off in some places, I can't tell if its going straight down or to the right diagonal try making it more like the first sketch Crust- Big ups on that shit, the coloring is nice I like the color choice in it M+S- Id choose the second over the first, I think that the letters fill up the space more fully than the first one- but i don't know it might just be the the effect the colors have on the readability View attachment 495238 View attachment 495239 View attachment 495240 View attachment 495241