Serg...I like your alphabet...but none of your pieces really...maybwe you should work with those letters?
Vader...I'd lose the tiny arrows and work on the right leg of the R
Knak...I think over all just go a bit simpler? Not really feelin' the squiggle on the N either.


I was told to work on my flow...still not there yet....unfinished....crits?
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mers ur handstyle is =[

but the piece looks cool but still needs some flow. for example the e looks cramped in and straight compared to the m thats \

get me?

 

fack double post

 

first blackbook

and first page

and secong page not done as u can see

crits, advise, whatever

 

Dives Reskr

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dave i think you should take your stuff to the intermediate thread.

 

i dissagree

 

vader - its different i like it... lose the white bits though
pronynja - use your alphabet letters there are okay
kaiser71 - shit fresh but get a fuckin handy
dank - start from scratch... beginners thread
knar - im not really feelin it looks like a shit handy with 3d
sheltr - not really feelin it... i cant even read it, and no that isnt a good thing

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I dig vaders..it would be too plain without a little bit of detail..maybe lose the large block of white on the E to even it out a little bit.

and im feelin that E, jawsyyy

 

bump new page

 

jawsy i like the concept for the letter but there are too many bits

 

way too many extensions. what does it say, otsibe?

 

yo emes that shit's banging yo, shit's all loose with it. give it a sick fill, I fucked up on your name, if you want I'll scan the trainwreckage... I'mma do another one soon
just haven't had time

 

says rfuge, so like refuge

 

Jawsy-prettty nice, some extensions don't look great like on the top of the P and on the leg of the R. Some parts of the letters are just too fat it seems, just keep playing with it and simplify if you need to but i like it.
M+S - do some straight letters and if i were you i'd ditch that little loop thing, they look ok with chizel tips in handstyles but not on pieces.

Bit of refining to my other sketch, still gotta make some proportion adjustments and stuff but will be outlining and paint very soon.

 

get the proportion right and its a solid piece.

 

some shit ive been fucking with lately
haters welcome!
posted in the intermediate thread but i just want to hear what everyone thinks

 

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