maniak stick to paper with ur throwies. and to get better can control do tags with cans untill u fell comfortable using a can. like when you can do your tag in less then 3 seconds and it come out clean then u got can control.
more wackness, shit paint. dont know why i made my J so huge [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrowie11.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i430.photobucket.com/albums/qq26/klic1/JANEKThrowie12.jpg
janek- your a kinda looks like an r. and the n just doesnt look like an n to me. i dunno but that is just my opinion. gettin good
that little line/dot, whatever it is, at the bottom of the E kinda makes it look like an S almost. i'm thinking it was accidental, because i don't know why you would put a line there. make the right side of the N wider, and the left side smaller. the a does look like an R. to fix it, just don't make the middle line come up so high. and move the hole in the A down lower. also, the K doesn't really flow. i like the J though. that's the only letter i wouldn't fix up.
Janek....Still got some work with keeping stuff clean, but your second picture is a hell of an improvement from your first couple two letter bombs from like a month back, and only like one drip. Keep at it.
Klic - watch the drips at the bottom of the last one with the outline. Workin on my can control. First one I didnt have enough room to put my K and the second one i ran out of paint to finish it. Ill take another picture of it when im done.
i write ARGUE or RGUE. sorry about the gay colors and shit. most of my markers are dried up and i haven't been racking in forever so for now it's colored pencils and papermate pens. critz please.
kilc- the notch in the first j thew me off, other than that the second one is fresh mani-do somethin with that m.. i like the style of the first one rgue, but the lower case g looks like a s.. might have work somethin with the r's extention.. went out and hit some freights with [Broken External Image]:http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/rg743/b-2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i220.photobucket.com/albums/dd117/rg743/c-2.jpg a lil sloppy, but its feelin better gettin back into the swing a things
Yeah i know. my mind was so caught up in the fact that i was for once actually bombin and doing my shit on a wall rather than paper cus its one of my first times actually using cans that i forgot to really focus to my letter structure. thats not how i write my Ms though.
Sense is fine, obviously he's not the best, but it's better to start painting early rather than late/not at all.
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yo thanks for the critz mang. i wopuld use capital G's but they all look the same. but i'll work on my r's and g's and i'll try to post a new piece on here. thanks man. peace.
umer... [Broken External Image]:http://i157.photobucket.com/albums/t65/uwriter/pict000122.jpg crits? klic - nice better can control than b4, your A does kinda look like an R tho mani - practice and make your letters taller sense - keep sketching you could definetly use some practice but nice job on the fr8 yipes - dope shit!
Even if he doesn't totally burn you, he's right. Get the fuck back into your books until you kids can at least put together a throw.