can i ask whats wrong with it?

well i decided to mess with it some more anyways
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i like pie...i lol'd at ur sig

 

the A doesnt follow the flow of S. fuck.

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all freestyled

 

upstate
i like that home one..it looked like love or hove at first tho.
i dont think its that bad, you got the right idea

 

blacktothefuture... that s is wack as fuck sorry. the a looks alright

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critz

 

thanks man, it has been a year since i have sketched anything.


BORE- i would say try to keep the bars the same size in each letter. and the weird tentacles on the k needs to go

 

took some time on a sketch for once...

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crits pleeaaasse

 

clean up your lines and what your 3d.

 

Bore- better than the last one. like black said, clean the lines up. and the 3-d is off in some parts.

 

Here is some stuff
Crits?

 

go more simple. and on a side note, i have the same bed covers.

here's my first sketch for the vapor battle. crits? sorry for shit pic

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also watch your bars alittle bit, some are vering off. (to droping)

 

yo there is a fire ass werms out there, google him, id change the name if i were you...shits lookin nice though

TRASH, i didnt quote your pic but it was on like pg 1838 or something, you need to move the top of the R and top of the A closer so theres no gap and itll look ill, H kills, and it doesnt flow that much becasue some letters are more edgy and some too rounded[/QUOTE]


YEAH CHECK THAT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

blacktodafuture- go simpler ur tryin to hard.




fucked up the m.

 

the S looks like a throw.

 

shem fix up the s and m a little bit and that would be a legit simple

 

i got lazy. im starting to hate this, way too many unnecessary extensions

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Dont do extensions. Tha top of the s needs to be a lot different