Janek - shits fresh as always man. nice and simp. safe - I like it man, Good job, loving the orange on it. Blue tag is my fave. Devor - shits good but i'm not digging that handstyle. heres something i got last night. Not the best but I think Its workable. crits? I cant get the L right. can anyone try get one for me? many thanks.
devor - nice letters for a warmup..i suck at those kinds of extensions and shit...work on uniform letter width i'd say janek - nice shit...dope improvement since the first shit i seen crits? View attachment 505147
use bars, L's can be hard to work with cause the over lap just find ways you can have it over lap the 2nd letter without covering it up to much
I might try a drop shadow or 3D cause that would fill out the gap a fair bit. I might also try leaning the big vertical bar on the L a bit more towards the E
You definetly have the right idea with the first one keep your letters the same size and consistency. You kind of lost it with he second one remember too use bars! You can really see that your letters were getting shorter through out the sketch. Do what you did in the first one and just mark a line across to show the maximum height so you can keep it incontrol
yeah i just noticed that they get shorter i had lines i guess i forgot about them or something lol what do u think i should do about the extensions?
DOn't even worry about them yet, seriously just focus on your letters. Also try to work on curved bars for your S and for your B
barks- looks alright work on the s scrap- i think it would look better if the a had just a line like the r and p [Broken External Image]:http://www.axcessmypics.com/photos/photo04/6a/5c/668514e533f3.jpg the coloring sucks crits?
Barks looking way better but try to keep the same angle on your letters if you use bars. For examlpe on your A keep it even all the way down, Do you see how its not straight anymore?