^ Dunno why but I keep thinking STAR when I look at your first throw.. prob 'cos the P is shaped like an R. Dig the I on the second, although the letters go from pointy-ish to round as the word goes on. Gotta work on the E.
Nine, Id make the two ends of the E meet up, Also since your letters are overlapping so much I wouldent cut off the opening from the top of the E to the bottom
Cheers yeah, I'll give it a go. Gotta find a nice cap for the outline (NY Fat maybe), last throw was a silver super fat and I had no control.
I feel like that's a really bad idea, weakfingers, what you did males it looks like a P to me. I would lose the bump on top, and don't make the E so small, it's half the size of your N.
MINE - Just bring your E out to the right a little so we see it more, but just a bit REK - your lines are kind of shacky, take ur time. Also (i have no idea how to say this) dont make ur letters as fat, like make them more delicate (?). Also work on your shadow Crits plz? im feeling both, but cant really choose [Broken External Image]:http://img195.imageshack.us/img195/6975/pict0723w.jpg
First one you should go with. The F & I are sweet, just get a nice E/N and you'll have a solid throw IMO.
fein - the only good letters are the F on the top one and both I's nine - pretty cool but ive never really been a fan of your style. looks clean painted weakfingers - that expiala is dope kasp - nothing wrong with it. round your letters out a bit sense - not feeling it. the little swirls annoy me barks - nobodys going to think thats a K
no. without that tag i dont think i would know what that said. you need to go back to basic bubbles for a while.
^^Yeaa you can't really tell the difference between the A & R. The "K" looks like a...i dunno but it doesn't fit in.
holy hell!!! barks...your third R is missing the hole and it has a tumor on it. you may wana get that checked out.... and an upsidedown cross......really?? wow