Thanks man. I've been working on my simps. Shit's difficult

 

Fixed it a bit
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uh.. yeah mr.yarbles I can't even read that.

 

It got better but why do you keep making the right leg of the R so skinny? It looks stupid

 

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Fetus- Your missing shadow on half the throw and the R is ugly as fuck.

 

That is the greatest toy excuse I have ever heard!

 

sonny...im sorry but dont make excuses. everyone starts somewhere, so having some wack shit is always gonna happen. look in the new to graffiti thread, sketch with some legit dudes get your shit up and lookin fresh excuses won't get you anywhere. I fell off a 6 and 1/2 ft ledge doing a hangover straight letter which dosent sound that high but falling off backwards, and i climbed back up and finished that shit. so...yeah.

 

dude your still in your complete not having the slightest clue on what your talking about stage..just listen to them and go to thenew to graff thread...it will help

 

How are you going to influence others when you have no respect?

 

Says ralish

THat throw is alot better work on your r though

also thinkin about changin my name to wasoe
WHat you guys think?

 

edit- Just shut up already jeez

 

Wasoe is defs an original name, your gonna have to put a lot of work into those letters though to make it sick, you might be more familiar with those letters, but I hate them, W,S,O. Hard times with those letters personally

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Yeah I already got the throw down adn everything so it isn't really a problem.

Your r is alot better but lose those spikes on the ends of some of the letters

 

I wasn't even talking to you, brah.

 

well now i feel a prick

 

knemo.. silent k
i think my k is to small and e is to small
i've been writing about a month now..
but im relly anxious to paint so as much crits as possible thanks

 

Kneeeeemo-Looking really good from the last thing I saw just go with that and draw it over over and over and it will come to you very fast.

Fetusr. Looks super original and Fresh. Some letters still need abit of tweaking but your missing the shadow on the tops of your letters.

 

changed my name

 

here's my toss.
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mess; i know you just changed your name n' all, but mess sounds played out...
the s at the bottom left is decent, but it kind of adds on to the playedout-ness, seeing as that s is pretty common, oh yeah, i'm not feeling that 'm' either...