weak that shits pretty hot just that T is out of it. must take a while to do since ur name is pretty long though.

 

Sqwint, dont like the squiggly I or T, but I'm really feelin the blocks out of the other letters.

Keso, go simpler, lose some of those addons, clean it up, and please don't use a polka dot fill.

Old shit.....crits?
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keso, the drips are to square at the bottom, make it round

 

^but first take it to the BB thread. This is for walls

 

kinda looks like it says SQUIRIT.
also, make the bottom part of your S longer.
Q is hot, though.

 

yo squint what cap did u use for that outline ny skinny?

 

I don't want to give any serious critique here because obviously you were cramped for space at this spot.

But I will say that the fill and colors look good and your letters look pretty good except the M and E need some tweaking.

 

I use Montana 94' for the outline's, So any low pressure paint and A montana level 1 aka super skinny cap for outlines.

As my name Implies, I have bitch ass weak-fingers I find ny skinny's kill my finger after ten minutes.

 

weakfingers i don't know why but i really don't like that style at all. Maybe its the super skinny outline or dusty fills but i'm not fellin it
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New style. Really really sloppy. took me like 20 seconds. the main reason i did this was to test out the colors. crits

 

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empty- neeeds alot of word ur t espically but the o on the s doesnt fit as well
mers- post new shit
squint- dope

 

This whole page is looking good for the most part
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puttin your E under your T like that can get confusing. the bottom one looks like ers. try makin your E the same size as everything else. and maybe dont go that deep into your R like that. if you know what i mean.

 

Zarb- That T-E collabo thing is pretty wack in my eyes.

 

Zarb try to work more on you letter structure; its hard to make out each letter

 

alright thanks guys ill start workin on making my E the same size

 

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this is my first attempt at a piece i know there are many flaws so be gentle

ters- i make ur e actually an e and not connected to the t

 

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first time with bars :O

posek- your throw is looking good, but that E is fucked... make it thinner at the bottom and make it smaller because all the other letters are proportionate except the e
ters- seperate the e and the T

 

first attemped piece
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