S is banging.. maybe make the L the same level at the bottom of the letters.. see if it looks any better. Try taking the holes outta the I also. I dig it though.
Dank- nice shit man, i would focus on the B and the T. thedudeman- the E is indecipherable, the M needs lots of work. think about the raw form of the letters more. abor- i love that throw, it reminds me of funky retro lettering a little bit. i would focus on the E more, prob the weakest letter. not sure if this is more of a throw or simple, but either way, just started sketching this name today, give it to me.
Shun-not really a throw. and if thats supposed to be a simple Id advice you to check out the new to graff thread or go back to block letters. abor rudest-looks really nice. Im personally not a fan of the left side of the S but thats just my opinion. New name, and experimenting with new letters... View attachment 512024 View attachment 512025 View attachment 512026 View attachment 512027 View attachment 512028
Haven't been on in a mad minute. Been working a lot. New name that I am probably gonna use for hands, straights, and throws. Sadly my hand is absent from this flick, but I should be able to up it soon. "Eskr" not everything has to be squared off like that. If you're from Ontario or Quebec, a name change might be an okay idea. Esker had a name change, but still. http://www.bombingscience.com/images/gallery/image_1192554764_5.jpg http://www.bombingscience.com/images/gallery/image_1192554764_6.jpg http://www.bombingscience.com/images/gallery/image_1192554764_7.jpg http://www.bombingscience.com/images/gallery/image_1186602079_5.jpg http://www.bombingscience.com/images/gallery/image_1192554764_4.jpg Those are just ones from the BS galleries. Again, if you're not from anywhere near the GTA or MTL it's probably not a concern. That 'slime' throw would be ace w/o the holes, as those don't exist in any lowercase 'i' I've ever seen. Also, connect the middle hump in the 'm' to the left leg.
just because its alittle messy dosent mean you cant crit on the letters themselves...like i said i was experimenting and try to come up with new letters so it was alittle sloppy...you can still read everything fine and get the idea of what the letters looks like...so crits would be nice
The letters are legible. They're all pretty uniform. Just watch your drop shadow near the E. If your lightsource is gonna' be the top right of the page and force the shadow to the bottom and left, make sure that E has the shadow it needs. Ok. I think I explained that poorly. Lol. Sorry. Don't stop at the little bumps on the E. Just do a complete replica outline of your original letters left and down of your letters.
Yea, Try to just have 1 line for the letters. You dont need to make many lines, as you progress your lines will get cleaner.
ESKR- everyone else said it, clean thems up. the S looks like its missing a chunk by the E in a couple of them, and the circles on the K and R don't look so good on the top 2. I think the third one down is your strongest. 99%shit- fuckin cool. the bubble on the R is weird, and the F could use improvement, but the cigarette I is awesome. alright here's a throw.