Thicker lines, saves going over them like that.

 

Sick?

 

slime-that shit is ill keep it up
dank-sick throw style
99%shit-lookin good but i would work on that i an do somethin about the left side of the r
mefe-keep tryin man you'll get it down sooner or later

my bad about the super small pic...

 

That would be ironic.

 

bigblue- im diggin that shit man
shem-how u gonna say that the m on that masn thow is wack an then post ur throw with that weak ass m

 

bump over a lot of wack shit
edit:
bump this too

 

I was just inquiring if that's what his toss said.

But I do like that color scheme.

 

I was saying it would be ironic if his name was sick,
because his throw is not very sick at all.

 

did this during school. new style that i call Baloon

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id let the baloon go and go bak to ur old shit imo

 

bigblueviolence; overall looks pretty good, but the top of the 'n' is tucked behind the 'e' too much, try pushing it out a bit.

abor rudest; the 's' is too high, move it down and you're set. i'm also not feeling that
'e'

mefe; new to graff thread, you'll learn shit there. also stay away from the shine thing, cause i know you didn't come up w/ that yourself ``coughmr.wigglescough``.

shem; i like it, few things though; move the top right of the 'h' just a tad higher. also, i like the whole concept of the 'm' but try making the outer legs rounder.

here's an exchange i did w/ shun.
got crits.
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Lol.

 

word, i'm not feeling that style either.

 

i don't even remember how i made it. i was just screwing with random shapes and was like hmm i should try this.

 

lol s'all good man, just keep practiing.

 

Gum, that shit you have going on looks like a good style to have in your back pocket,
for small walls and shit,
but I don't know if I'd feel seeing that regularly.

 

oh, i felt comfortable w/ that style too, i'll try to branch out though.

 

Well i was a complete and total faggot last time I was here so I'm trying to redeem myself.
If anyone has anything to say go ahead.

Pretty shitty but its what i've got
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