try lifting the middle of the W all the way to the top, like the other two bars of the W. and for your bottom right "problem", try replacing the problem area with a big lump rather than that weird loop, or just make that part circular.
word.my N is my weakest letter definitely.its a new name i got time to work on it..this is a practice spot im trying to up my skills before i go for the freights...
bampity bamp to the new page. deem - nothing really flows, try to look at some other peoples throw ups and get ideas on how they look. dont bite though.
Drkst- your S looks better without the bump in it fo sho, but I think the capital E was nice. capital letters in throws separate the wheat from the chaff. B needs a little work, O needs a little work, and make sure your N doesn't look like an H. looks good overall.
why the fuck am i in your sig? i dont believe i was beefin. it was e-sarcasm and for as much shit as you talk i would expect you to be a hell of alot better. go back to simple letter throws.
You're in my sig because it was fucking funny. You're famous. Don't complain. I been tossin' this bubbly style around for less than 2 days. It's not perfect. That's why I posted here and asked for tips on some letters. Just trying out the tips I got and reposting so they can see what it looks like now. I've seen your throws. You can't be mean to me.
Bigger picture Safe - Take that hole out of your S, and youll be good to go. Trew - Your trying to hard, go way simpler. Vega - As before, work on the G and the E and you'll be good to go. Now crit me motherfuckers.
[Broken External Image]:http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/1443/36002475.png Darkiest- drop the lump on the B, make sure your E is the same size on the top and the bottom, and make sure the line of your N always stays in the middle.
everything on this page is looking ugly... not gunna lie possible name change grin or kem ? View attachment 515410 critz?