Pretty much everything on this page kicks ass. And it's a black book thead, so why would it be a bad place to post a black book throw?
Its not that its a bad place, their are just better places to post such things, such as the tot throw forum.
aight b4 you do think about the fill first and then draw your letters. then rethink that fill and go a lil creative . use some parts of fills that everybody uses like the chrome feect rainbow colors and use the color chart to help determine the colors you might wanna use. [Broken External Image]:http://i.ehow.com/images/GlobalPhoto/Articles/4425121/ColorChart-main_Full.jpg hope that was helpful
Taz, overall good start,1st one, u mix up curvy thin to thick with straight thick bars, your a is too plain n simple in comparison to the other two, you tried too hard to make your z look similar to the t, doesnt come out that good, also you have to open up the top of your z 2nd one, kind of the same, here you go with thick parts with thin connections(i do not mean the connection between each letter but the connection in the letter itself), the problem is , you left out the a again,its all straight n has no thin connections, the right foot of the a is way too fat, too many "chippy" extension, also the way the head leans over to the z, does not flow at all, t n z both push into the middle so id use a in its original way like this ---> A , same style you used for t z , try not to chip em too much, it doesnt look good. @coke, fill looks good, just do not connect your s with the a like that, it ruins it all, the s is weird, shorten it, sharpen its belly, bring the feet of the a closer together, also you connect three of 4 letters, why ? connect them all or none. , what a novel
lol cocacola my vissions to blurry and my mind is all mashed up ill read it in a bit lol cus right now that just went right over my head
yo TAKE your flow is alittle off and your bars are a lil fatter in some place but over all its a good starting point
l e n are good, lose extension of the n, move your o closer to the l , lose its fat ass ugly ulcer extension, s is trash, top totally different style, and a distracting extension, you have to work especially on your s, try not to change style within a piece...
Burgerz- It looks to me your trying to hard on effect's. Work on keyboard letters. Project Link- Link I'm seeing that style alot now. It looks cool but the letters have no flow. I picture it without all the extra stuff on the page and just the letters and they dont look to good. So unless your doing all the extra stuff around it liek the drips and characters I would work on how they flow together. Graffyk Your shit is really spaced out. Your using bars from what I can see but just look at alot of pictures of graffiti and then it will come naturally. Cocascola You got good colours and can do 3-d just some of the connections are weird. Take-Your on your way just keep on drawing. Fetus Work on your R and U
sewk? go simpler and dont bother with extensions golem its okay but ur G is messed you should just connect it snore....thats a pretty common name and i know the style ur going for...i hate that shit but w.e floats ur boat View attachment 515296 View attachment 515297