Listen fetus,
How is that beef I was explaining that some toys try alot of hard shit and cant do it. You still need to tone it down and hit the books hard. And by running shit you kids go to every major bridge and do shitty things liek that, your shitty tags or on every mailbox. and I see your crew tagged everywhere. When I say running shit i mean graffiti "ska" everywhere I look. I dont get why you get so mad when I say simple shit. Theres a reason I cropped you outta that picture... its because i had a little bit of respect for you but I guess i just lost it when you flipped out on me.....

 

lol only thing i'd say is maybe not put that little part of the R inside the T kinda makes it look like an e but w/e good shit though

 

everything in that picture is wacked out except for fetus aint too bad.

 

speaking of which any li toys out there? haha

 

trying something new: thowie letters and backwards "bic" i like cib 10x better
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make all your letters the same size! and drop that fill son

 

word.fetus needs to chill on this arguement.go hit the books kid until you get your bars and everything down and THEN practice your can control in a chill ass spot out of the way where no one can see your shit and THEN hit the streets.i got alot more respect for squint right here becuase he puts in work,and doesnt constantly bitch and complain.especially when given crits.and he's on the right track with bars and what not,not with all that shit yall *****s is pullin with no flow,horrible fills,shitty letters in general all over the place.fetus needs to go back to the drawing board jus sayin yall.

 

What I'd like to know.. is can we zoom in on the shit on the other side of the tracks!? Shit looks proper..
Also, two things.. and let's not get butthurt with me saying this...
I would not hesitate to cover that, if I saw in person. Rather then get "Hard" online.. lay down some fire.
+10 internetz Weakfingers.

 

Shit doesn't look that proper to me...


NYC:
that second one looks fly!
and extension at the bottom right of your K would look so ill too.

 

Fetus why would you even let anyone in your crew paint that while you are right there next to them? No beef.

Bread, stop with the fills. Simple one color throws will do for now. Crazy multi color tosses are whack anyways.

 

good looks dudeee

 

alright no more fills, im just used to doing that lol and ya didnt have to quote the pic mayne :]

Edit: fill was an accident, i did the throwie over some white out, but i did try to make it have "bubble shine" lol

 

I think you still need to work on everything man, no offense...

 

I didn't quote the picture.

Scape, work on your handstyle ( I know this isn't the toy tags thread), and those extra little bumps aren't doin it for me in your throws. Work on your letter structure too.

 

no offense taken, but thanks for the crits guys. i'll get back to practice.

 

Anyone want to do some tosses back and forth?

 

I really enjoi That A you got there and I like the shape of the R's Leg
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jTuyXfEbtf4


Vagrant, I'm down but im not the greatest. I write skwint/squint whatever is cool for ya.

 

i dont understand the video you posted.....

 

ANY ONE WILLING TO HELP ME?

To be honest i haven't wrote graff in awhile and im pretty rusty but 2 days ago a teammate and a friend of mine died,He was on my football team and he died in a car crash the same night after we won our homecoming game

And i was thinking about doing a throw up for him on wall some where so i was wondering if someone can just draw something simple for me so i can throw it up.I need it to say R.I.P J-RAY ive been drawing all night but i suck at these letters so if some one can post a pick of that so i can get an idea that would be great.I really wana do this so if some one can help that would be great.I will post pics up if someone helps

thank you