^ I don't like that line on the N very much, because that line width isn't repeated at all inside of your simp. bSquared - You got some major time on your hands.
ok, those squiggles are gone. i'll post the rest in a few.. i'm not saying this in spite, but that K in Kaution is really bad, like the bar up top is WAY too small, and you gave the bottom bar of the K an awkward ass bend. i'd also try to tone down the letter drips JUST a bit. @ your most recent pic you posted here: looks alright, but you should try making some bars pointy n' shit, like your throw ups.
Yeah, Squwint, if I were to give you advice on your K, it'd be to let the two diagonal bars overlap rather than meet at the vertical bar. Know what I mean?
something simple and quick. I hate the O View attachment 524053 FSMone- Don't connect your R and A like that b squared- That looks really nice finished weakfingers- I don't like the hook on the bottom of your T's cocacola- I like the second and third ones
stot- round your o and s, you're going the wrong way, play with the bars, don't add shit coca cola- the bottom one is the best though I would take that thing off the top of the a, the top one might be second but if you enter that they may well not look closely and be dazzled by the fill, I'm not encouraging this but whatever.
dam thanks for all the cris and ill do another piece maybe tonight but im high i might geet lazy and just eat a chicken sandwich
stot- i prefer your straights they looked alot better.. cocacola- ive always kinda liked your stuff, i guess, but it always looks kinda sketchy to me, you needa get your shit cleaner, smoother lines, just the way your letters bend and shit. Some of them are different sizes.. like your I's really small and it kinda just throws it off for me. Skuint - only thing i really see wrong is that your S is kinda small compared the the other letters.. Bsquared- shits clean son.. coloured this thang.. not too happy with it. wanna paint it soon, but idk, crits?
Sied- Im not feeling all the seperations Snow- I think that would look better with more of thoose like toxic looking drips coming out or maybe without and a 3d, the N is nice Apeshit, your creative man that tag is SWEEt Squared that shit is sweet, that center piece with the two names is my favorite. I could only get one of my pages to loud but ill figure that shit out and try to put more, i already know i fucked up that starburst on the first letter [Broken External Image]:http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/6717/img0732ip.th.jpg