last page was all talk and crus...so yeah crus that u is turning into an o uhh here ignore terrible s on first throw, and terrible s/r on simp but whatever i guess..=/ View attachment 529284 View attachment 529285 View attachment 529286 View attachment 529287
Roes- simp in the first one middle looks good just to much dead space between R and O and E and S tighten it up also your S is a little sloppy just work at it, make ur lines less umm shAkey and it will look good also work on your hands.
Yeah, I know the world looks like crap. Oh well. Any crits for the letters? @Gam, The middle bar of B's goes into one bar, not two. Check out the B on your keyboard, yo. **EDIT** The letters are outlined in purple, not blue. Just noticed you can't really see that.
As248- go way simpler.. Look ~~~> AS... Simple as that. Milk- lookin good much better then before. Keep it up.
Like this? I know that knowing letter structure and all that stuff is important, but this just seems like a step backward. I just want to develop a quick throw and go bombin. I don't want some boring simp that would take a few minutes to lay out with paint.
Is that shit a no-no? Cause I though it looked kinda cool. I like cropping things, I do it with my artwork too...
Well, it normally just doesn't look good on a wall. If you are painting trains then go for it, otherwise you kind of want your shit to be at least semi-centered.