Bring your S curve lower and your D wider

 

yeah and sead your s is a bit big

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Not digging the R, but your simp for this was pretty good. I like the wood too, it flows nicely.

 

@Milk Boxx, i really like it. Nice, simple and clean.

1st attempt to add some "add-ons"
So any crit/comment will be really helpfull, cuz i doubt i did it right...
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Thanks in advice, Rolin

 

don't use extensions or add-ons.

 

What about letter structure ? If you think off all add-ons ?

 

^ It seems pretty solid without the extensions.

 

Aight, thanks

 

Quick piece i colored while working,

some of the 3d overlap is messed, sorry.
Any crits would be awesome.

 

Harbor-Not digin the A, looking good keep it up though.

 

you should try bending your letters and adding some style to it since you pretty much have structure down. after you're good with that, then try add-ons.

 

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Thanks, i'll try that and post it later on.

 

Black idk whats up your ass but you defiantly belong in the Toy section. just cuz you can copy somones handtag off B.S. (Rime) doesnt mean your good.

 

sead.. u have a sick style.. but u should keep the shading to one side. i think it would come out better.
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Scope-ITs just plain sloppy, you should make both E's the same, work on your 3D, its missing in way to many places, and the whole piece needs to be cleaned up, looks like you got a shaky hand or something.

 

that K is REEALLY hurting too.

 

Does anyone not see that black midget met those big writers at some show or soemthing and got them to sign his black book...... Its dumb thats your posting that shit in here though. Its just you showing off that you met them