At first glance I dont think anyone would have. And some KFC's look like that here XD

 

maybe its a kfmcdonaldschicken.......

 

Watcha mean by staying simple ?

 

^ Hollows, no shadow, basic letters

Crits on them?

 

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hollows? you wanna do fill ins! hollows are olny for when you dont have paint or its a sketchy spot and you gotsta dip. they're only good when you dont have a choice. but thats just my opinion.

 

do mind the underline and the arrow above they r not my throwie
crits?

 

well for starters, make all your letters the same size. dont underline your throw if it was on purpose and clean up your lines.

i was bored so i did a throw in pen it took like no time on it so yeah roes

 

This is why you are one of the funniest guys on this forum

 

ughh i hate being on the bottom of the page.

flick for talkin

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I don't like the O or the wiggle on the S too much. Also, your E has negative space, when none of your other letters do, so maybe just make it a line. I like the R.

 

Trying myself again, this time with only ZT.
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Do you think it's better with only ZT or the whole word (Zest) ?
Critz/comments/masturbate watching my throw/whatever please

 

it doesnt really matter but i would do the ZE rather than the ZT. you could flow with it well. oh and here's a simple throw that could help possibly? i know my T's are wack lol

 

Yeah, but I have no fucking idea of a Z.
Don't like yours, I like mine but yeah, you seem to hate it xD

 

well of course YOU'RE gonna like it, people always incorporate what they like into shit.
where as somebody with an outside perspective were to look at it, they'd judge it accordingly.
i'd bite what trikasshoe did for you, yours looks like a turd compared to what he did.

 

Trik did a great job, go from there man.'

Roes: Good start, just make the 'r' bar more round and change up the big oval on the end, ad more curve.

Been out of the throwie game for a bit, i screwed up on the M so went back and made some shitty shadow to cover, you get the idea tho. I'll clean up later

 

hahaha i dont think we'll ever settle lol
in my opinion the only thats wrong with yours, you just need to keep top and the bottom further apart from each other. im not saying to take my style im just trying to show you an example.

 

alem? atleast make the bottom of the a consistent with the rest y'know, make it pointy like your other letters.
this is personal preference, but i think the middle of the M is too small and makes it look bad.

@trikasshoe:
yeah, what i hate about that zest toss is how he makes everything look like squarish blobs with lumps on them.
a real big ruiner.

 

thanks fellas^^
Thrice, that throws pretty dope except A which is kinda different than the other letters at the bottom. and like you said with the M