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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. FlippingChickens

    FlippingChickens Banned

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    ^ i like those flares
    i wasnt trying to hard on the 3d i just liked how my letters all proportionaly came out large,i was more focused in doing some dope colors than anything else..thanks for the crits!
     
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  2. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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    i'm loving your simps weakfingaz. that S is cleaned up and proper. the charac still distracts from the piece tho. its just not at the point that your letters are at. you misspelled couldnt too btw.
     
  3. weakfingers

    weakfingers Elite Member

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    Word and also thanks Atesk. I never really saw my shit as being considerd a simple, I cant really do anything more complex then that at this point. Now that I look at it though my shit is pretty basic.
     
  4. smooth_nuts

    smooth_nuts Elite Member

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    bump cause im bored.
    that squint is looking nice,only thing that bothers me is the opening on the i doent really fit in.
     
  5. Bets369R

    Bets369R Elite Member

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    ai50.tinypic.com_dp8cxi.jpg

    okae that shit is raw. whoever thinks graff needs to be all clean and pretty hasnt been in the game very long.
     
  6. AteskOne

    AteskOne Elite Member

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  7. random hero

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  8. suparjafar

    suparjafar Senior Member

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    everything on this page is dope. also sqwint or squint your handie s is a bit crammed. other than that your simp is super nice

    View attachment 530906
     
  9. funhouseXcast

    funhouseXcast Elite Member

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    crits please

    squint clean, but i don't like open ends

    okae so smooth. I like the simple colors, the quotes are cool but your handy could improve, not that it's bad but it could be better.
     
  10. CrAzOnEr!

    CrAzOnEr! Senior Member

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  11. Aktag

    Aktag Member

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    FlippinChickens - really like your fill, good job
    funhousXcast - smooth and nice, love the final piece


    Here's my try, I'm still working on 2nd one, need to color it :p

    [Broken External Image]:http://img405.imageshack.us/img405/8848/picturepy.jpg

    Any crits would be very useful!
    Thanks, Rolin
     
  12. take2

    take2 Senior Member

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    I'm back. Gone for a while playin modern warfare 2. Midterms comin up not much time to sketch. This thread is gettin pretty whack...... Thinkin about movin up. Okaer fix the k and the o. I see what style your goin for and your almost their. just tweak your shit a little. Rolin bottom one has potential if ya take the wack extensions off and dont make it look like you traced a chisel tip tag.
    Sinkilla. Cant read it dog. Dont post shit up here with stuff bleedin through underneath it.
     
  13. n8galicia

    n8galicia Senior Member

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    modern warfare < graff...?
     
  14. Th3t4

    Th3t4 Senior Member

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    this an ambigram I'm working on.
    started it in a traditional style
    gunna work on it and make it look a bit different
    ai47.tinypic.com_34xow2o.gif
     
  15. Discretion

    Discretion Senior Member

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    i just started writin like 2 months ago. nothin special any thoughts?

    ai352.photobucket.com_albums_r358_future101000_1211133049_01.jpg


    ai352.photobucket.com_albums_r358_future101000_121109132734.jpg
     
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  16. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Try it without highlights and work on your bars a bit more.
     
  17. n8galicia

    n8galicia Senior Member

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    I'm diggin the second one in the first pic..but fix your N it looks a little awkward. The rest, work on it and loose all extensions until you got clean letters
     
  18. Aktag

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    Thanks take2, i'll try smth like that without those extentions....
    Discretion: I agree with n8galicia yeah
     
  19. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Get off your power trip you uber toy. Sate has a clean sketch, much better than you. You're one of the wackest people in here, and stop posting in the intermediate thread. Battle me bitch!
     
  20. drOping

    drOping Senior Member

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    Rane- your onto something, clean it up a little bit, but I like
    Rolin- I like the bottom one that isn't colored way more than the top one, not feeling those little curvy things.

    Sate2- I like the second one more, but both are tight, keep it up
    Squint-clean as usual