THat looks pretty nice. I just don't like that random bar going through the curve on the S. It can be mistaken for a D. View attachment 530996 I tried bending my bars a little.
@stot: Looks real nice. I like the wave the T's seem to make. If anything, try to smooth out the top of the S. Everything else has a nice flow and curve to it, and those corners on the top of it are kinda abrubt. Nice otherwise!
absolutely nothing wrong with having a firm understanding of the basics. no point in trying difficult styles if you cant rock simples. my advice is just try and push yourself outside of your comfort zone a little. you may be upset with your first dozen sketches but you'll notice and improvement. i mean your structure is there and thats the hardest step. bump my shit. got overlooked and another from this morning [Broken External Image]:http://img46.imageshack.us/img46/8664/1212091200.jpg
I have. If you dissagree with my comments, just say so. I wont be offended. Everyone is entitled to an opinion.
it's not to offend you, i just think that anyone who thinks stot's sketches are good is clearly clownin'. stot, shit sucks as usual.
atesk-you have ome really dope structure man,im feeling the e alot. fucking around earlier when i was high as fuck,excuse the smears i ashed on the page lol
So many fucking egos in here... for every good sketch there's about 15 shit talk comments from the wackest fucking dudes
Droping- It looks cool but some of the extentions dont make to much sense. I also couldent see that painted on a wall, Like i said it looks cool as a sketch but I dont really know how well that would look painted. Empty Can- Keep to your straight letter style but try to slant them all one way and bend them all in on direction, Also try to slide them a tad closer together. Atesk- I'm not really good at critting single letters, but from what i've seen from you and those letter forms, there looking good. Smooth Nuts - I like your second sketch the most. The thing I like the most is how your O is positioned and leaning, If you could make the rest of the name flow like that I think it would maybe make it look better, But it looks fine the way it is now. Trying to work with some new letters N' Such, Something That I could paint with some ease. Crits Please.
Stot - S doesn't match the typeface. Slek - Make all of the little lines the same width as the bars, and it'd look better. The middle E bar going to the K looks clean. Atesk - Sorry, I don't like any of it. Squint - Not liking the top of the S. Okae - I like the second better, but the K is too thin.
weak fingers- your U is huge, and you S does not look to good either. Smooth nutz- i agree with zennegan about the first one. Empty can-? why isnt your O above your last T, your S looks like a 5 some of my shit... i hate P's....any crits would be nice
i know it's not in the classical graff style you may think I'm trying too complex things too fast. my tag is poor, I know that. my graphical design is not poor, that's my strength. crits appreciated (don't shit talk for the sake of it)