Finally, some god damn crits lol. Yeah, I know, it was just a rough sketch. When I try, I can make the bars the same thickness, I'm just trying to find where I can make shit bend, add extensions, etc, to make my letters more piece-like, if you will. Also, I'm trying to get down the flow, since I suck mad hard when transferring to a wall. Anyway, the fills clean, 3D's a bit short in some places, but looks good overall.
http://s563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/?action=view¤t=Photo31.jpg do you really think the hand is that bad? its pretty simple, straight forward... also in resist, dont hide the e so much
super i dont like u R its the left leg and the top goes forward idk why and i dont like the scriblles in the S
zennegen- all beef aside i'll give you some crits. I have no idea what the fuck is up with the first one. On the 2nd the zennegen at the bottom is nice. On the 3rd, your E covers up too much of your N super- try to make your R not stick out as much
crustoner- work on your letter overlapping. make the letters more distinct. maybe a different color scheme would help. zen-the first few are bad. the last one has the most potential. the best thing i can tell you is to keep it simple til you get a little better letter structure. Slek- dont extend the bottom bars of your L and E. and i wouldnt have your L overlap your S quite so much. your e and k are solid looking letters though.. and dope fill. 2 from tonight.. havnt been on here in a while.
^ unavailafail. Roes - I like the E, work on the R. Slek - I don't like how the S overlaps. Zen - Last one is best, practice it. Just doing some tags. Tried out new stuff, I normally just do the super simple shit: [Broken External Image]:http://img34.imageshack.us/img34/6386/img0593l.jpg Then I tried changing up my throw (the A specifically): [Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/5188/img0594s.jpg
vega for your tag make your a lower case like in the style your throw is instead of a regularly drawn lower case a
Resist: Lookin' pretty proper there man aside from a few of those cuts (not sure about the top right portions of the Ss). Lovin' the fill too. Keep 'em coming. Zen: I'm not feelin' any of it, but the last pic isn't bad. I'd go a bit simpler and see what you can come up with. Roes: The handy's not bad, but I think you could definitely make it better. I'd try something different with the R maybe? Vega: You're mixing sharp edges with rounded edges. Look through the throwie thread and begin by trying some of those bends and develop your throwie like that. New name, first quick sketch with it: View attachment 531784
Your K is too thin, make your bars the same widths. And thanks for the suggestion, it looks way better: [Broken External Image]:http://img19.imageshack.us/img19/3260/img0595y.jpg
Then I tried changing up my throw (the A specifically): [Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/5188/img0594s.jpg[/QUOTE] haha fury i like the lil frustrated lookin character you got there. try doing characters more, maybe thats your thing ya know.