i like ur progress roes... try using a vanishing point like black said, even though u dont HAVE TO it always looks better... color them shits too! steal markers from children lol
i take that back. black i do dig yer simples but after awhile you gotta progress. so just keep on movin up slowly. you'll get it. tweak yer 'f' a lil. it seems a lil off. maybe its just me. stay up. oh and yer handys aint half bad either
this isn't really graffiti but it's for a tattoo this will become an ambigram (a word that reads the same both ways up) so I only have to draw 2 characters to cover the whole word, the F/e and r/e it should read "free". and no, I did not choose the word. i flipped the letters and put them next to the unflipped so you can see how it would read. crits welcome
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Roes: Your E needs some tweaking, but overall it looks pretty good. Just keep runnin' through simps and practicing making clean lines and you'll be good in no-time. Safer: Your S and A have pretty good flow together, but your F, E, and R throw it off. Your R isn't too bad, so I wouldn't scrap it, but your F and E need a lot of work. I'd develop on that though for sure. SLM: Read the New To Graffiti Thread and start using bars for your letters. Read the thread and you'll know what I mean. Tonight's efforts (as it says, disregard the handies- I know they suck, lol): View attachment 536158
squared thanks for the tips but ive tried it, but i have trouble with the "s" i dont like boxy can you give me an example on how to use boxs with an s
Anybody have any criticism on the simple? I usually just bomb but I wanna start really trying simples and shit Asker- I am loving that bro Patchy- Work on just doing simple keyboard letters and use bars.
Asker - Don't have two line-weights on the S, and I stand by everything I've ever told you. SLM - New to graff thread. Roes - I literally said out loud "Damn that ***** got hella better." Keep at it, and I dig that E. Push your letters closer together and don't forget to work on hands. Other than that, good job.
All of your letters basically. Your M looks bad, and so do the rest. Basically, copy keyboard letters and use bars. This way, all of your letters will be proportional. Kow - I don't understand your first sentence, but give crits. I don't like the character, and all your letters look whack, in my opinion. Actually the last O and W look good.
it says in full sentence all written out : crit me or talk shit whatever is clever..i dont post really but boredom causes me to.... and graffiti have no rules... lol jk... hmm how would u improve both my char. and some letters?
Cocacola: That 1st piece is cool suparjafar: Like others said, your progressing. I like ur R Patchy: I think you should try simpler....straight letter, imo. Squared: Nice piece, but i think that i've seen same letter all the time from you...dunno My latest piece: [Broken External Image]:http://img109.imageshack.us/img109/9840/picture011ku.jpg
overall not too bad, pay more attention to proportions, your R is way too squeezed compared to the others, the o is alright , try to place the extension somwhere else...L and N go good together but your i is perfectly out of place, so strange, bottom n top extension, how its leaning forward to the L i guess you get the idea....oh and id try to make a fat first outline n then a second, you have three outlines, i mean it doesnt look bad but try switch it up n see what it looks like...
Hey people, Im new here. You dont wanna know where, but im writing for a long time. Here I guess Im a toy. Well probably, hers something I did yesyerday. =] [Broken External Image]:http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5373/newstyleo.jpg