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More critique por favor. snoozr- I think it'd look better without the little extension bar on the top of the S. Also probably would look better without the underline connecting to the R. Other than that, I dig it.
the real ensoe is from vancover in canada to be exact, type in artcrimes.com, go to featured artists and then look up ensoe you'll see what i mean, jus tryin to help out
More- I really like your shit, I love looking at flares- whats the can/tip you're using? 99- I can't read most of it- I'd say try working on making the letters more legible. I like the originality in the letters though- like (I think) it's a B thats a circle on top and > on the bottom. JEK- I think those are straight, I suggest just messing around with them now, maybe try different connections, try playing with the size of the word- like going from small to big or big to small. Dark- I half to agree with the other post- loose that extension it takes away from the good letters you got Discretion- I'd go with the 4th and 5th and keep working with that. ENSO-STEEZ- That shits straight- whats with the random nature pics?? Bread- those letters are straight- I'd say just keep working on those The evolution of a tag... View attachment 538089 View attachment 538090 View attachment 538091 View attachment 538092
i think its either a pink or orange cap,,,, i found it in my mess of markers and it had old paint on it....stupid parents threw out my bag of like 300 caps
that looks like the evolution of outlining a tag and making it look like a piece... evolution of a tag would be like regular letters turning into ones with style... i hate outlined tags, but the one on the wood actually looks ok where it is for some reason
Boodah- I'll clear up the letters and repost, it says ONE- if you can't make it out. Zook- Truth- its more of a tag turing into a piece- I see what you're saying. Big ups for feedback. Stuck- That sucks...300 caps?? Damn. I've found that using good paint makes such a big diff. when doing flares- I used to use walmart paint with like fatcaps and was like this shit doesn't even work, then threw it on some Belton and was like-shit- thats what its supposed to look like. What paint are you using?
If you ask me, there are also too many arrows. The add ons are whatever, I mean do what you want with those. But simplicity is a good thing. Stay up.
rustoleum and anything rackable....only time i ever get my hands on any higher ranked can are wen i rob toys
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No no, SAGE. Just like that. More - Work on your flairs, but it looks pretty good. Roes - Glad to see some street work. If you're making your own ink, add more pens or add more bucket paint, since the top ROES (if thats what it is) tag looks a little thin. The tag looks good though.