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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Kayone707, Jun 15, 2005.

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  1. Flawless Victory

    Flawless Victory Elite Member

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    I think we should be saying the same thing to you.
    I don't understand how that orange.... shape is even forming letters.
     
  2. Mellowdrone

    Mellowdrone Member

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    well than maybe your legally retarded. try ... putting your finger on your screen, and play follow the lines. or is your monitor even on?
     
  3. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Why do you even ask for crits if you can't take them?

    He could also be illegally retarded, you never know. Plus...
    Then* you're*
    No spaces for an ellipse. Capital O in a new sentence.

    Really, I wouldn't call anyone retarded without you being close to perfect.
     
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  4. sinkilla1

    sinkilla1 Elite Member

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    lol rezi its not bad for abstract art but that doesnt resemble anything close to letters so stfu you little bitch or gtfo
     
  5. kew1

    kew1 Senior Member

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    ai616.photobucket.com_albums_tt250_slerk_January_22_1244.jpg ai616.photobucket.com_albums_tt250_slerk_January_21_1541.jpg
    lately ive just been fuckin around with new styles an stuff heres 2 more
     
  6. Mellowdrone

    Mellowdrone Member

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    Shut up I was angry when I wrote it! >< (better?) Grammar police...
     
  7. RedEyes

    RedEyes Elite Member

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    This thread is dead with a bunch of wanna be writers bitching back and forth!!! So post flicks or GTFO!

    Kew- you could have something just lose the random extensions and focus on maken your shit more solid
     
  8. Fury

    Fury Elite Member

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    Kew - I like the color on the 3D on the second one. If you could somehow merge both styles into one, that'd be legit. I'd focus on making your letters roughly the same size and work on them before the extensions. Coming along nice though
     
  9. Con-Artist

    Con-Artist Senior Member

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    kew- i second redeyes
    throw style im playin with... crits?
    ai853.photobucket.com_albums_ab92_Somberatm_538b0c67.jpg
     
  10. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  11. STEP TWO

    STEP TWO Member

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    did this in school
     

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  12. WasteFour

    WasteFour Member

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    Spare - Cool stuff, keep it up, but the S is way over leveling the other levels, make it simpler.

    Somber - cool throwie =]

    kew - like some dude said, stop that random shit OO, develop letters and style dont do random letters ><".
     
  13. WasteFour

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    Spare - Cool stuff, keep it up, but the S is way over leveling the other levels, make it simpler.

    Somber - cool throwie =]

    kew - like some dude said, stop that random shit OO, develop letters and style dont do random letters ><".

    edit:
    Sorry for double OO... slow connection posted twice ><"
     
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  14. KnoxIn

    KnoxIn Senior Member

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    hey i haven't been on in a long time and i know this is sloppy but i had saturday school for 4 hours and this is what i did the whole time, some letters are whack and shit but still any crits? any usable crits anyway,
    (bottom right) NAS
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    (top right) TI
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    (left side) 2pac, AOTP
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    over view
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    con- i usually hate throwies, but i actually like yours im diggin the flow, especially the first three letters, not so much the last two though.
    kew- simples bro
    mellow- take the damn crits start simple and figure out how everything works before you try shit like that
     
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  15. STUTERS-DAILY

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    Kew- I feel like your trying too hard..lose some of the extensions.
    Somber-Solid throwie, just in my opinion i dont like how the bottom part of the "s" stretches to the left. Nice handstyle.
    Knoxin- Not much to say cept that im not feeling it.... its just all to much


    Harsh crits please? One's for my friends crew and other is what used to be a 10 minute sketch.
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  16. LeaksOne

    LeaksOne Elite Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://15.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_kvdwl80C2a1qa0o00o1_400.jpg

    i played follow the line with my finger and my moniter was on......i found a Z. thats about it.....just post something simpler you did
     
  17. zennegen

    zennegen Banned

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  18. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    my new trowies

    ai931.photobucket.com_albums_ad159_datkewlkid09_graff002_8.jpg
    ai931.photobucket.com_albums_ad159_datkewlkid09_graff001_8.jpg
    critss^^ plz
     
  19. zennegen

    zennegen Banned

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    i'm not feelin your name.
     
  20. woonybomber

    woonybomber Banned

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    yeah me ethir but its better then rear
    but other then my name how is the letters