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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by Loki X Sho, Jan 22, 2010.

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  1. Loki X Sho

    Loki X Sho Banned

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    I thought it would be cool, if their are any poets..to share.
    I write daily and I love reading what others have to say as well.
    Reading someone's poetry is like solving a puzzle...

    I can see it all and its beautiful..
    But my guts are baking on a planchette.
    I can balance on this hill outside..
    and watch my insides perish.
    I can see the afterlife,
    I can see what was before...
    But I can't see myself anymore.
    My hands are on the glass,
    and I'm begging to be free...
    I need an exit wound...
    someone put a bullet hole in me,
    So I can crawl out,
    bloody and used...
    and so I can make a quick recovery,
    from my soul being abused.
    Sound just echoes.
    Treble hits so hard...
    like knives on skin,
    getting buried deep within.
    Maybe I can grasp the blade,
    and escape when the last wound is made.
     
  2. OPIEtheADDICT

    OPIEtheADDICT Member

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    who writes poetry? i just fill up journals with the same name over and over and over and over and over again. its like poetry... except is dont rhyme, its one word, its rarely black and white, and o yea, real *****s do it.
     
  3. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Basically anything that douche bag Edgar Allen Poe said, he stole all my material.
     
  4. irockyourass

    irockyourass Senior Member

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    ahh... poetry, my long lost love. i used to write almost every day but somehow lost my inspiration along the way and havent written anything worth reading in quite a few years. i'll post some of my older shit, i could probably take up about 10 pages with all my shit so i'll only post a few for now till some other people start contributing too. but most of my shit was written at least 5 or 6 years ago. anyways here's a few.


    lets dance our bad dreams away:

    so last night
    we had our nightmares
    and we danced them all away
    as i held you
    and my hands began to shake
    we swayed with the rhythem
    waiting for our hearts to break
    and then i awoke
    to my suprise
    you were standing
    before my eyes
    and you said 'i love you'
    now all my worries are gone
    so lets dance our nightmares away
    cause its the only way i know
    that you are here to stay
    and that in the morning
    i will wake to my suprise
    i will find you standing before my eyes
    and i'll say i love you
    and mean it more than you know
    and this will last
    even when the cold winds blow

    untitled haiku:

    nothing gold can stay
    even the white snow will grey
    after a few days

    eyeheartewe:

    rolling down the hills of green
    feeling drunk and dizzy
    laughing till your neck breaks
    and my stomach starts to ache
    our cheeks are on fire
    and i tell you i hate you
    but you know that i'm a liar
    its love
    walking down the beach
    kicking water and sand
    getting eachother soaking wet
    i try to grab your hand
    but you run away
    dodging jellyfish and shells
    and you make me carry you like a baby
    its love
    so thank you for being there when i needed someone
    and thank you for being there when i needed some fun
    and thank you for being there when i needed some love
    and thanks for not stopping when i said i had enough

    tough luck kid, it'll never happen:

    its like being dizzy
    when i hold her i spin
    and when i see her coming
    the butterflies begin
    they tear at my stomach
    i nearly feel sick
    but its all that i live for
    i feel the flames start to lick
    at my heart and warm me inside
    then the clouds break wide open
    and the ice storm comes back
    how could she like me
    with all the features i lack
    cause she's beautiful and strong
    i'm plain and i'm shot
    how could she ever feel the same
    when she's everything i'm not

    falling out of love has never felt so good:

    seeing you smile used to make my day
    but those days seem to be fading away
    now i count the moments we're together
    waiting till the storm passes
    waiting for some warmer weather
    cause you're love is like a snowstorm
    i thought that i was stuck
    my wheels just kept on spinning
    they'll melt the ice with luck
    now they're finding traction
    and i am finding action
    with someone else
    and i'm falling out of love
    with you
    falling out of your arms
    into someone new
    making you smile used to be my goal
    now i've given up and fallen down the hole
    but there's someone who is waiting
    for me at the bottom
    its me and i am whole
    your love was like a snowstorm
    and i thought that i was stuck
    but i kept my tires spinning
    and melted the ice with luck
    now they've found some traction
    and i have found some action
    with someone else
    and i've fallen out of love
    with you
    and i've fallen from your arms
    into someone new
    the fall took longer than it should
    but fall is warmer than the winter
    and falling never felt so good
     
  5. Ume

    Ume Moderator

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    There once was a man from Nantucket
    Whose dick was so long he could suck it.
    And he said with a grin
    As he wiped off his chin,
    "If my ear were a cunt, I would fuck it."
     
  6. Loki X Sho

    Loki X Sho Banned

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    lmao...well I'm glad this got approved.
     
  7. RealNiggasDoRealThings

    RealNiggasDoRealThings Senior Member

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    Hahahaha!
     
  8. ~Az

    ~Az Member

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    Holes in our shoes,
    Holes in our clothes,
    Holes in our minds,
    Holes in our hearts,
    Holes.
     
  9. Apse One

    Apse One Member

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    If I were to charge you
    Than "love" it wouldn't be
    So that's why I decided
    To paint your wall for free
    =)
     
  10. PETER

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    I am horrible at poetry and english in general.... so forgive me.

    Suffering symptoms of adornment.
    a little reliefe from the torment of emotion related stress.
    I'm starting to wonder if I should have taken of my love proof vest.
    Willingness to make eye contact replaced the desire to shy back
    I find myself putting on colors insted of camoflaging myself in earth tones and black
    making my self notice
    I am who I present
    where I've been
    what I've done
    and the ones I've loved
    my most precious things are those I've esperienced
    Every memory is golden
    even if they are tarnished.
    I don't show myself as perfectly varnished
    The scratches go well beyond the surface.
    my words are far more than simple lip service
    Everything serves a perpouse
    I still don't know mine and
    once felt worthless
    Hope and optimism have since
    filled my half empty cup
    much like when I was a young pup.
    It feels good to come out of my hiding spot
    get out of the musty stench of my prematurely
    planned resting plot
    Life is Beautifl. You are Beautifl
    Thanks for remiding me I can be usefull
    For this I love you
     
  11. I revilitize my mind, breathe
    until i capsize divine, what i need
    is to be the shine, is to see the sign,
    that what im doing is right, but right now,
    what i'm doing is write, the things that people don't always find right

    that was a spontanous one, messy
     
  12. aiko

    aiko Senior Member

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  13. HipsterPunks

    HipsterPunks Senior Member

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    This might be the worst thread i've ever seen, go back to your livejournals
     
  14. aiko

    aiko Senior Member

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    I bet Venom was the one who okay'd it.
     
  15. subcyde

    subcyde Senior Member

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    Say, we can go where we want to.

    A place where they will never find.

    And we can act like we come from out of this world.

    Leave the real one far behind.


    We can dance.


    We can go where we want to.

    A place where they will never find.

    And we can act like we come from out of this world.

    Leave the real one far behind.


    We can dance.


    We can go when we want to.

    Night is young and so am I.

    And we can dress real neat

    from our hands to our feet

    and surprise you with a victory cry.


    Say, we can act if we want to.

    If we don't nobody will.

    And you can act real rude,

    and totally remove and I can act like an imbecile.


    We can dance.

    We can dance.

    Everything's under control.


    We can dance.

    We can dance.

    Doin it pole to pole.


    We can dance.

    We can dance.

    Everybody look at your hands.


    We can dance.

    We can dance.

    Everybody's takin' the chance.



    Safety Dance.

    Oh, Safety Dance.

    Yes, Safety Dance.


    We can dance if we want to.

    We've got all your life, and mine.

    As long as we abuse it,

    Never gonna lose it.

    Everything will work out right.


    We can dance if we want to.

    We can leave your friends behind.

    Cause' your friend don't dance,

    and if they don't dance, well they're

    no friends of mine.


    I say, we can dance.

    We can dance.

    Everything's under control.


    We can dance.

    We can dance.

    Doin it pole to pole.


    We can dance.

    We can dance.

    Everybody look at your hands.


    We can dance.

    We can dance.

    Everybody's takin' the chance.


    Dance.

    Safety Dance.

    Yes Safety Dance.

    Safety Dance.

    Let's Safety Dance.

    Yes, Safety Dance.

    Safety Dance.

    Let's Safety Dance.


    Safety Dance...

    Safety Dance...

    Safety Dance...

    Safety Dance!
     
    Last edited: Mar 30, 2012
  16. aiko

    aiko Senior Member

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    wow, i never knew those lyrics were so gay, until now
     
  17. aiko

    aiko Senior Member

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    thx subcy always looking out