your all trying to hard, cept for stot, you need to keep proportions rushed but i liek the over all look. [Broken External Image]:http://i621.photobucket.com/albums/tt300/2wayducttape/DSC_0022-1.jpg
squint ur always doing the same style of bubbly type letters,change it up a bit [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3121.jpg
Siko- Back to simples baby, your letters have no structure. Rin5e- You're on the right track, but try to keep all your letters the same size Atesk- Dope I only got one of my sketches to upload. Just gimme crits on the throw, ignore all the other bullshit... [Broken External Image]:http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/6885/dsc4315g.jpg Rip me apart. P.S. How do I resize?
Aner, your tag looks pretty cool, And from personal experiance dont rep your area code it just kinda heats you out to the cops that may or may not lurk this site,
resize fail..... upload them shits to flickr..... and itll give u like 4 size options when u view the picture... i cant make out shit from that pic except 905
tofe-those letters are kinda hurtin, the color combo is not that bad tho weak-those arrow things look weird man, letters are comin along kew-its not terrible, just keep workin it. yeah i know everyone says simps,simps, but if you dont experiment you wont find new shit.
rinse looks alright. id say loose the little kicks on the leg of the R and the top of the I. also work on that drop shadow. it's all over the place right now. random nonsense charac from class. dont like it enough to color it. [Broken External Image]:http://img696.imageshack.us/img696/8950/005vs.jpg
lets see.. aner - i could see that style being further developed it's not too bad, but for now dumb it down a bit rinse - just copy the letters off your keyboard, don't try bending any bars yet atesk - dope as fuck trying to get this style down perfect so I can paint it regularly lemmegetsomecritsplz View attachment 545931
mawks i like it. the only thing i would change would be how the left leg of the M ends...but im not sure as to how i would change it. i would just keep playing around with it. but definitely heading in the right direction. rinse- i think that looks better. the N is pretty fresh. i would try and make the rest of the letters similar to that style. charac i just sketched up. this one will be colored. [Broken External Image]:http://img18.imageshack.us/img18/600/006vl.jpg
forgot my bbook at home so i only had lined paper meh Bigel - looks sick Aner - i don't even know it's too fucking huge Rins - comin along i think the first one looks better, just keep bar width consistant Mawks - lookin good, don't force the flow, doesn't look too forced there, jus sayin Atesk - char's are sick
Atesk-Char is dope, looks like you actually have a clue how the body should look Spam-Nice simple Changed up a couple things and need to add an E Appreciate the crits
sup bombingscience, havent posted here in like a month! rins work with one bar width at first, your changing widths and its not working mawks the middle of your w is weird but i like the sketch and name. madd oldd [Broken External Image]:http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0284.jpg new stuff up soon
thanks. yeah im taking figure drawing this semester for college and i've taken a few figure drawing courses in the past. figured you cant learn how to exaggerate features in characs if you dont know how they should actually look. pegcityboy- im loving the S. the only thing i would say to change is try and make the M the same size as the other letters and maybe round out the A like the other letters. rounding out the A might make the piece to mimiced tho so it's whatever. that A looks flows fine as is so its all how you like doing it.