the z on the top one looks a tad to busy.
bottom one is kinda cool

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yo hook a man up with the critiques

 

bottom one is illllllllllllllllllll
wanna exchange?

 

i already owe an exchange to ms. ill get at you later about it

 

im bored so heres some old shit from like 08.

 

dope shit everyone

 

401 il have it up sooner or later
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very nice. awesome R.

 

bottom page bump

 

you'r bas have a nice flow

 

u down for an exchange zoner? got the day off tomorrow need somethin to do

or anyone else?

 

bottom bu bu bump

 

Everything on the last 2 pages was amazing. I'm not getting to many crits from the toy blackbook thread anymore so I'm gonna try posting in here. If im not good enough I'll go back down. I would normally crit but everything has been looking solid for the past couple pages.
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your first one is great skuint, but i think all your S's are too skinny. fatten em up.
but great stuff man.

 

the one with the green half scratch fill is hawt. your getting alot better

 

ya man what u write

 

Yea Alts I saw that shit, i said it was dope and i appreciate the exchange.
Zoner looking dope with the black fills.
Skuint coming along nicely
quick little spot
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destil

 

first third fourth and fifth are fuckin sauce, but yo that third one is real tight


yo have you gotten my pack yet?