"Zero" piece - Hey flask maybe kick a little ext. out the bottom left of the "f" kind of like the one on your "a" but make it a little longer [Broken External Image]:http://img23.imageshack.us/img23/5804/dscn6312a.jpg

 

SODI. thats pretty hot but you need to clean it up

 

yeah. fucken dora the explorer textas. haha jokes, my artline 100 is almost empty

 

time to re-up on the markers.

 

yep :|
fuck. I deleted both of my posts. let me repost the pic
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kk will try that definately

 

i kno ma o and r needs work
always open for crits

 

maybe different colours (that's just me) but ya i like it...rad man

 

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Not finished. Got blocked on the O so decided to post what I have. I'm kinda feeling it but I feel the letters are a little too wide.

sorem?- looks alright. Try somethin' a tad simple. and that O is wack

 

yea man i fuckd up on dat o n it says soren

 

empty, i gotta say. that S doesnt look like it has any style at all.
its a little to all over the place.
it doesnt follow a theme.

 

soren you got potential, i want you to take a ruler and draw to parrallel lines before you draw another piece and then make the tops and bottoms of each letter touch the lines. you got some style but your shits always shrinkin if ya feel me.

 

what are we feeling? Sorry about bad picture quality

 

Bear, the R is too hard to read.

 

safe, fair dos! looks alright on its own when i get it down, sometimes my Rs do look a bit too bubbly though. is the circular-ness the problem?

 

yeah, i think you need to show more detail. draw a little bigger and give yourself some room.

 

cheers pal, will do

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