I know i fucked the 3d but what eves

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can you point it out? its down and to the right. ill look it over again though thanks.
Dave-Dope K and E but the O is a mess and i dont like the way the A is tilting.
(bump)

 

bottem page

 

and a canvas with my ***** reskr shitty phone flick

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Look at the angle of your 3D on the extension of your O compared to the bottom of the letters. Also the width at the bottom of the S is almost non existent compared to the other letters. The back of the letter should go into the I parallel and not meet where the letters are stacked (It should look like the I and k).

If that makes sense.

And for all you cel phone picture takers unless you live in a friggin cave at least put a lamp near you so your work gets some proper light!

 

Dave those fills are fresh
And red eyes its pretty much the right/bottom side of the S
And the O on the lil brick comin out the side but nothin too major
Keep it goin man

 

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the second one is differnt.. dope none the less bump the handy

 

Your a god zoner!
On that first one its fresh but I feel like u could do better Z'z bro

Bump for critz

 

focus on lettering more than coloring

 

I do on my new stuff those bottom three are old_ish and the first one has a good outline(in my standards) but I also like filling it with small details

 

practice piece for the prodo shit. all my markers are fucking dying. shit's weak.
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feelin that meng^
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soooooooo dope money! you wanna exchange?

 

Atesk that fill looks like u did it intentionally and it looks great
And zoner looks like a volcano erupted or another a bomb hit
and your the only one left
haha..btw are you from cali or az?

 

Feelin those old school canvas peieces
Zoner digging that red one
Atesk that shit is hot.
sorry for the shitty cell phone pic
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rank...its epic

 

is this intermediate?

 

Is this ^^ your highschool gym?