But you know what, I saw you post shit in the Bombs/pieces that you were replicating this. I agree with Weak/Squint.. you should be sketching shit you can paint. I agree with people who say to sketch, sketch, sketch.. but the fact of the matter is.. you can sketch dope shit. But what's the fucking point if you can't transfer it to a wall or surface. Dude who put me on to Graff every time I'd sketch something out, he'd crit it honestly. But, directly after.. he'd say "Now let's see that on a wall." ( Fucking bastard GS ) LOL. But it's legit man.. you need to do and work at both. Not just one. So, keep sketching that.. but make damn sure to put your hands on a can. Because the whole point is.. to paint. Right? Not just color in a book, because if that's the case.. they sell kid's books for that. Know what I'm saying? Just keep practicing.. you'll get better as you get up.
??I did DAE. Is the D and E critiques about DAE or are they for a different post. As for the A and E in the DAE I see what you're saying, imma try and raising the middle bar in the A and E to get room for the bottom hook in the E and see if that works- cause right now that shit looks weird.
[Broken External Image]:http://img9.imageshack.us/img9/4483/img0004lh.jpg i know its shit but im sorry please say shit, i dont care cause im just seeing how this style looks good.
really good. i think it runs really smoothly, the O could use some work as well with the S and im feeling the K. keep up the work man
hey guys wanna crit this? i know im a toy but i needa get my lettering down the forum wont let me upload shit so i had to publish it online ;P http://img704.imageshack.us/i/img3339c.jpg/ http://img691.imageshack.us/i/img3329l.jpg/ http://img638.imageshack.us/i/img3309t.jpg/
quick shit. probably going to paint this tomorrow give or take a few things, except with a white fill.
root - that a looks good..dont really like that forum peice,that m is bad and not really fealing the o or the bar sticking out the f and that r is just way to fat..nice colors flask - lol what style are u talking about,cant barely even read any of ur letters looks terrible siko - just dont stick anything out ur o just make it an oval skye - eliminate all arrows and stars and stupid shit..focus on keyboard letters shem - fix that e dont connect it with the m and i also dont like how the h connects with the s and ur h is all squiggly wtf [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3163.jpg
ahah i dont know, i was trying a new style and yeah, i coloured it then redid the black outlining, ill post a picture later, im too lazy lol. syke101. you are really good, just work on your letter structures. flippingchickens: still you're bending your letter's which come's at a point where it friggen looks UGLY. fix that E and the F and you're good.
^^lol syke is not good at all. The only thing decent are those throws at the top of the 3rd pic. Work on simples and lose all stars, arrows, connections and dodads and use bars.
i jus did another i know its kinda bad but what can i do to fix it? D: http://www.flickr.com/photos/48381036@N04/4431102822/