I do give crits, and stop trolling dude i see you all over this site telling people to go to the toy BB like you some king or something.
move everything closer together and fix the c its the only letter i dont like o and make the ball in the i biiger
i cant believe people will actually listen to people over the internet YOU CANT POST HERE!!!!!!! imaa sorrry masssa!! dont hurt mee shit is fucking pathetic post wherever you want whatever someone says if they care enough they will delete it fuck everyone
this is why i like the intermediate forum. actual good crits that help. if i dont belong i'll move down... again. And i only mentioned Alts and Duke since they usually give the best crits and alts has been playing the role of Moderator on this forum for a bit. And as for the person who said "no real improvement" should see this.... View attachment 552472 1st piece i posted on this website. obviously a drastic improvement.
actually its not an improvement at all. Your letter proportion is all off, your bar thickness is all over the place. theres no flow to the piece at all. The highlights in the 3d dont look like highlights at all they look like polka dots. you took like 3 steps backwards with that. go back to the other letter style youre doing and improve on it instead of trying something completely new. Edit: Nevermind i read that wrong. if thats the first piece you ever posted here, then yes you have improved ALOT, good job.
bump, crits for real now y'all sico- pretty solid, try adding a horizontal bar on your i and o to match/oppose the s and c safe- the f needs to be rounded in that new piece. you should try incorporating ur old and new styles, shit might be dope
shit didn't realise I was playing the role of moderator lol thought it was more grumpy old man!! That Seyar is nice, i am digging that thicker bar style at the moment, only thing that kills it is the pink blobs in the 3D, i can see how this style could develop some nice connection s like the E to the Y and the A to the R with the S just kicking off the flavour to begin with. Sico - nice starting point, but bring the letters closer, maybe have something jutting off to the top right of the O to match the bit kicking off to the left of the top of the S
on the real this website does help you prgress your graff to a certain extent and thats just basically gettin the concept of bars down which is very useful in painting.....but the rest of this bullshit is useless your shit develops based on how quick your mind creativity can expand i think the problem with kids these days is they just think anyone can pick up a pencil and write....but nah not really you gotta be artistic in some way and you have to be able to pick other styles up and not bite them but take multiple styles and put it into one thats when you got your own style and no that doesnt mean go take bits and parts of letter from saber n revok that means you those styles as a guide to your own shit and for people on here who think there hot shit cuz you can post in the intermediate thread well go fuckin paint instead of stayin n sketchin all that.....that gets you no where and you are not considered a graffiti artist there.....maybe and artist without passion which makes you a wanna be
It was a quick simp for my homie Code but I didn't do the E, an yea I like the A a lot, I was gonna ask alts if he wanted 2 exhchange but then I don't think he got the time
still in progress dont really know what else to do... besides 3d [Broken External Image]:http://i81.photobucket.com/albums/j203/idleon3/IMG_3397.jpg
Bottom page bump, an flawless post some of your shit then you can talk shit, I bet your shits garbage, that's why I ragther not even go on this site cus faggets only tlk shit and start beef for no reason, sketch an put in werk that's what the website is for