Polar - im likin the throw, not feelin either of your R's though. shorten your r on the piece. i like the o-l connection. im with Crust on your P extension but i like your o l and a. i got a 'krust' piece i did yesterday. ill post it just got prismacolors today, first time tryin em out. tell me what you think. [Broken External Image]:http://img695.imageshack.us/img695/3656/manikprisma.jpg edit: [Broken External Image]:http://img189.imageshack.us/img189/1351/dsc00192cn.jpg
throw ideas CES: Did this one for this chick MADDIE: What im trying to write now CEASR: constructive crits?
Karma- Are those two P's? If they are loose that extension on the back of them or make it a smaller space. other than that I actually like the O and the E. Just lose that little tag thing coming off of the O. Its unnecessary. Its pretty dope just work on making the letters cleaner. Manik- I like what you're going for. Just work on your letter structure more. I don't like the T or the S in the Krust one. I really like the style you used in the pen sketch with the green outline you posted earlier though. I kinda like the red and yellow one too. Just keep practicing.
define your letters meaning make every letter look like what its suppose to be. and even your bars meaning make every letter the same width
doodle, crits? flipping chickens: hard to tell that the O is a O. the middle bar on the F prob shouldn't be lopping bc it looks out of place. and there should be more shine. View attachment 553661
Tofe - Props on the cyursive style that shit can be tough, I stil havent been able to sketch something worthwhile outlining, the 3d also really sets it off. quick 5 minuts exchange.
Chicken - That looks sick, the 3d would start confusing me Safe - Im diggin the whole thing, love the s. im with Empty on your e though