Im not here to argue, I dont care plain and simple. Thats whats good, get up.

 

im from thew UK?

 

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struggle with the s that day

 

bottom page bump. the split in the h is on accident, i.e. me being careless using a marker

 

That's what's up.
It'd look dope with some fat ass highlights.

 

marry me =)

want an exchange??

 

thinks looking good on this page,

For the round robin battle,

 

yea its the toy thread man, but the point of the threads for toys is for the pros to help them out like hes askin. if you dont know how to help him then just give props.

Tyze?? - looks pretty dope, the Z (if a z) caught me off guard, kinda iffy/hard to see. looks sick tho. i have the same problem with keepin style and steeze Also just make sure the top and bottom of your letters all meet up at the same heights. my problem too.

Ravine - that shit is DOPE as FUCK! wish i could do that in english class man.... fuck. yea the fuck up in the H would look better gone but screw it man, its a doodle in class that turned out fucking ILL! love the purple too

Weakfingers - first off i love your name lol. the piece is pretty damn sick, only thing is the handstyles below are hard for me to read. love it though

 

That Tyze isn't toy thread material. That ZE is, but the TY balances it out. It stays.

 

The TY is dope, but you got rounded edges up top and sharp at the bottom, for the rest of the letters just look at your previous bars and form the letter. My suggestion.

 

dont like the handsteez but its a dope entry. glad i wasnt battling you cause i didnt try that hard on my entry. crust i hope you brought it just as hard.

i'm definitely digging that tyze idk why you kids think its toy forum material. i dont really see anything wrong with the letters. the style varies but its still a similar style. i'm feeling that E too. dont listen to the kids that cant post in here, your shit's dope jupsick

 

Oh so that's why the rest of the toy forum is in the fucking dark ages, you're all holed up in this "intermediate thread". Whatever, shit's dope. Weakfingers delivers, and Ravines piece is nice, but whats going on between the R and the E?

 

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lmao tyze?? i couldnt read that wack shit. ill give you crits when you post in the thread you should be in. keep tryin
weak- im not feelin that at all, thought u woulda had somthing iller. i think crusty will take that one, i thought u had it for sure.

EDIT not saying anyone in here NEEDS my crits, i was just sayin.

 

sesh- if you cant do better you should stop hating. you dont even belong in this thread so how are you gunna tell people they dont?

bilnek- dont like the bend at the top of the C. if you had cut it off a little lower it would have looked a lot better imo...like this:
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cuz if there in here why should i stay out? atlest i dont post my work. not diggin the green oputline on that one either^ woulda looked better without it.

 

Bilnek - im feelin it, just where Atesk dont like the bend, keep it up that high, just dont bent it, maybe make it a sharp coner/edge goin up to the same height as the W. im feelin the green. maybe if it was a lighter green?

 

to much white papper showing threw, someone has shaky hands.