whats a while? in the span of writing in a few months, i got from here to here [Broken External Image]:http://i563.photobucket.com/albums/ss72/suparjafar/PIC-0284.jpg i dont practice everyday in a blackbook or regularly draw simps and what not. should i be better than i am now to your standards
dont worry about other people beefin jafar, you clearely worked it out better from your first. personaly i like your second piece, you 3d'd it perfect, just lose the little bits on the O and work your R around a little. the leg doesnt fit with the other letters.
haha that was me. whatever tho, i like it apart from the i, i dont think it fits in well cos the dot on the i is small
heres one i just did. turned diagonal to give me room, i think i messed up on the outline and the leg of the K gets a little thin. its not bad though. crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img168.imageshack.us/img168/6536/dsc00207xm.jpg
yo manik that is a solid start dude just keep practicing those and build off them, good foundations. this is some new stuff i just started messing around with, not my usual style but let me know what you guys think. thanks this one says IN SYNC TO THINK. i know its a little bizarre... View attachment 554787 View attachment 554788 View attachment 554789 new word possibly: DETAK View attachment 554790 View attachment 554791 in progress View attachment 554792 helpful critz much appreciated
the first one looks good but i cant make out most of the letters. i dont really care for the second but i like the first detak
I like the m's you posted manik roes - fix that r and s sez - work on keeping everything the same size and use simple letters detak - like the t on the last one and the a is good but dont stretch it out so much,and the k is good but that leg bending so much is wierd and the d and e are too small first page on my new book,crits please. [Broken External Image]:http://i456.photobucket.com/albums/qq287/flippinchickens/DSCN3256.jpg
Manik- Its a great start but dont slant the A GrimeTime- sick style. I like it. Tofe- i like the cartoony style of it and everything that is going on, but i really dont like that "TofeOne" in black.. the F is too simple, the T looks like an X, and the space between the letters isn't consistent. And in the blueish "TOFE", the O should be straight and the T should be capital.
tofe: hey man nice fullpager especially the character. where it says TOFEONE I think it kinda ends off because there is a big gap inbetween the N and the E if you know what I mean. grimetime: the detak one is fucking dope, the wip one looks dope already by the looks of it __________________ crits?
i fixed it up for you, some of the red blocks need to be the same size, that one in the S is too big and you need to make the bottom bend on the S straighter to match the top. see pic: [Broken External Image]:http://i883.photobucket.com/albums/ac31/smokeitup421/1111.jpg
ah alright, I will do a consitant square pattern and i will do it next time, the only reason I did my S liek that is because the E and the Z were touching and aswell with the R so I didn'tw ant it to be lonely. and just kinda curious,e for all pieces do they have be all the same in terms of uppercase and lowercase? for example SEZr, do they have to be capitalized in any way or it doesnt matter just as long it looks good. _______________ crits? i messed up on my flask, i need to start doing these like this. I can't do keyboard letters for some reason.
Tofe - its an ill one pager but your black T does look like an X, your E's a little big and your ON E. like the thumbtak deal! Sezr - i like it but your red squares need to be smaller in your S. Z needs to be a bit more visible too. Heres one i just did today, tried paint marker for a change, havent used em in ever. only thing i see wrong is i coulda made the A a bit more visible. Ignore the tag!!! Crits?? [Broken External Image]:http://img208.imageshack.us/img208/1361/manikpaintmarker.jpg You cant see the dark green lines in the letters either. blends in to much...
says "zyps" the y looks g-ish though but whatever[Broken External Image]:http://img80.imageshack.us/img80/8305/dscn7345.jpg
SEZR- Keep Practicing those block letters over and over. and then once you get em down add effects to it like 3d that way it gives you an idea on how to do that as well before you move on to more complicated things. Manik-stop with the arrows and go more simple and stay away from coloring just yet Dier- your getting their. Keep your letters the same size and dont let them get gradually bigger as you go. this is a problem i think we all had at some point as begginers. Also I would take off the extra dot on top of your "I" but thats just me. Havent posted anything in a while. I've mainly been working on my throws/bombs/tags and haven't really tried any sketching lately.