View attachment 556590 Re-draw of a previous piece. I'm gonna change up the R a bit and color it. Anyone have ideas for colors? I was thinking a blueish fade with a purple outline. dunno yet. Might add some half assed background too crits? Take- I'm feelin that last one but I think the right leg of the A kicks out too much. Tofe- Simpler. Learn proper 3d Myth-Make the Y and T more like the M and H. Stay simple.
Yes! Empty! Finally something solid. I've been gone for a while so I haven't seen much but I like it. Fill it in
Yeah, Dank does NOT take crits.. I gave up. And Stot, looking solid, bring the leg of the R out of the circle part at the top right instead of the base bar.
ok then. go back to simples and make all your letters the same width, height, and at he same level until you get a good grasp of your letters then go back to that style from what i know freestyle does not involve pencil..... and you need to work on your bar widths.
other then the top right part of the v its mostly shadows i can recolor to help it what i meant freestyle was just swirling letters lookin for sumthin to color my color charts arent bad just coloring in general i cant grasp to my liking
yea i was just bouta say freestyle means no pre-sketch hence no pencil lol stot id work on the S a bit more, the bars on top look odd and too thin.... and listen to crust on the R, or just make the circle inside the R bigger to where the rounded bar looks the same size as the rest dank do ur letters first then a 3d of the whole thing, dont put 3d on overlapping sections
clean up your lines next time, they're shakey as fuck dude. practice control with you hand before you move onto intricate things.
your letters dont flow right, keyboard font is best for you right now, also hold off on the characts in letters for a while
Tofe: Are you doing the same thing and same thing over again? Everysome says keep the letter length the same and also the 3D and you aren't improving as much.