here goes... just keep working on it, simplify it to the max and build from there. i would take the R out of your name too. 5 letters is a bit much IMHO for a beginner. im not trying to be an ass whole.

 

i like it, thats my opinion tho

 

some "eggheaded" E's look cool.
i'd say Grime should like make the middle of the lowercase E like ruler straight, rather then giving the lower a sharp looking mouth y'know?

 

^^^ Like Fube's E.

 

dont connect your letter to much with that name

 

well thats the point of doing a one liner



just went for a walk with the girl...sorry about the size

 

sugr not bad, i just dont like that loop on the bottom of the R

 

That R kills it, try to tweak it.

 

I hate that style of like I guess LA tags?

 

crits/tips?

 

I'm not good at it anyway
I just try to branch out

I actually don't like the hard gang letter shit anyway

 

I dig it.

 

shits nice. mr yarbs

 

Doing it dirty with **** Ink Grimey Green in a Joystick Bullet mop. This has to be one of my favorite combos. Leaves the place completely wrecked!

 

bombing a toilet, hardcore shit bro

 

holy shit....that says gasm??!!??
you REALLY need to get a brand new tag. that ones not working

my nigguh yarbs putting in work.

 

Yeah I'm actually gettin down ATM
But I got an incognito name that no one knows about.
It's cool, no one tries to jock my nuts or tell me how much or not as much up I am.
The whole "being famous" thing if that's even what you can call it gets really old really quick