[Broken External Image]:http://img690.imageshack.us/img690/7051/019mw.jpg eh. quick pen freestyle. stuck on my shite letters.
thx for the crit brahhh... da kine! aloha! mabye ill try LANA i might do some dumb shit like xovz or some difficult stuffys wit my lettaz brahh. aloha brudduh
kre1-just work on the letters, maybe do some simples based on your pretty sick handstyles illlogic-make that Z look more like a Z, and maybe add an extention on the U niccsacc-try putting some characters in your name, or develop into a piece crits on this
niccsacs- that venom is nice, but the M looks like its an N trying to fight itsself into an M, let that letter flow into its self alittle bit more.
First picture... kinda fucked it up but I was using some weird as markers the Characters are fucked I know. http://img714.imageshack.us/img714/5759/46185839.jpg
top bar of the S could be longer and some orange in that backround would set it off yellow is a bit bright by itself
i really dont know what you take graffiti for no offense, but this shit isnt just a pastime, you need to work on bars for a long ass time or something
what you think about it? first one is my name. (sorry about the strange thing on M - my scanner is dirty or something... ) any crits?
View attachment 557142 obviously not too good, just working on a new style. crits? StayHyE, everything looks great except the PHOTOS text, way too distorted vertically. Also, the shadowing on IT IN is wayyyyy colorful. viseversa101, you need to work on bars. none of the letters are made up of bars, but you really need to work with bars first. i think you know what those are. also, make sure the letters are next to each other, not that spaced apart. fakiee, BARS, BARS, BARS. You have such potential, the A is really dope, but everything else just looks mooshed together. the Sun one is waayyyyyy off balance, you can't have one letter really big and the others smaller, it looks.. unbalanced. your 3D is good, just make sure all the letters are proportioned correctly, and USE BARS.