fuck! i thought so too. lol

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any better?

EDIT: I know I fucked up the Y.

 

what the fuck man it doesn't let me post pictures here or intermediate.
and shiny that's much better.

 

yeah i should probably just stick to simples.

 

thanks man. i thought that im making bars, but obviously im not. ill try.

 

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this does look like it says shitty lol.... but also looks a lot like MS's style to me, in a way

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^MS^

 

crits?

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dumb it down a little. less extensions, focus more on the curves of your bars.

AND WHY THE FUCK WILL IT NOT LET ME POST PICUTRES.

 

hey shiny you might want to try angling the top bar of the n more, maybe make it completely diagonal at first and then work some style into it

 

Hey guys, just got back, no pics my bad. been settin up a new blackbook for my tag. You guys will only be seein Manik.

StayHyE - I think its a pretty dope piece but i would keep your 3d all goin one way. dont switch it up. Diggin the fills on "Gel It In"

Vise - Nice simple, work on your S a little more, make it more bar like. the I can be bigger too.

Fakie - for the firs one, loos all the extensions and connections. start with simples like the one Vise just posted. as for the Sun one, you have extra 3d lines you dont need. for on your letter structure and dont try to go crazy with it all. the simpler it is the nicer it looks. youll get into the crazy stuff as you get better.

Shiny - i say the first is trash, the second is nice just watch your bar width in some places. looks nice though. just fix it up a bit

Pixels - thatws pretty ill, just make the P part bigger. what you did with your E and your L are kinda iffy too.

Emba? - i like the stile, your E needs to come up bigger and make the top not with the middle of the E.

 

bored...

 

take- i like your shit just work on maken it look cleaner, it seems your stuff is just blobs, try using a sharpie to define your letters.

 

critics please

 

Crits, Please

 

Your letter structure isn't great, the V on bottom pic is much smaller than the S and A, top one is... messey and the lines aren't straight and the outline blue thing is badly done. thats just my opinion.

 

write it just like this

SAV

no corny add ons.

and the S on that first one is HURTING. if thats a throw revise the entire thing and just do bubble letters

btw no offense but sav is such a cheesy name.