a quick simple, dont like it all that much but the concept is there View attachment 559428 zoner - those are intense man, i don't like how the letters shrink in the second piece and your R's spine iss too hidden by your E imo. that green and blue one is fucking fire though duke - sick ass character dude size - on the right track man just try and keep a flow to the piece with consistent letter sizing and maybe some repeating shapes to your bars, makes it more aesthetically pleasing. and your I is looking like an O stayr - far from inter man, keep working on it. and be careful with your crits in here because as you are inexperienced somebody on the right track could take some bad advise from you and revert back to a more overall toy style. no offense i've just seen it happen a lot in the past with other people, sometimes crit is better left to the more experienced meto - hate the "me" love the "to" not a lot i can say about it but id like to see what else you're capable of stayhye - armen is it? not bad, i can see what you're aiming for. you've still got a ways to go but keep working with it. i would suggest not looping the leg of the R and for the "rme" portion of the piece try to keep the letters from extending so low so you have more of a flow, simpler would look better with that style for now kringe - i don't believe you are ready to be posting in the intermediate thread, work on your letter structure for a little longer. your bars are all different widths and the overall piece just looks like a mess imo
I do understand letter structure. I was trying to shape the piece different, sort of like <>, you know? And I didn't see a way to be able to do that without making the letters thin on the sides. But then, if all the bars were thin, there would have been a fuck ton of negative space in the middle. That was the first time I really fucked with that type of style, and most likely the last, but I do understand what you mean. Some slaps..
feeling a bit more fluent now. give me a week and may try coloring something. aever- (snare now?) - love your style as i have forever. only letter i dont care for in the piece is the N a bit too curvy and overlappy imo. great overall. handys are killer. what did you do for the white middle of the handy? dead marker, writing over deco... or? kringe - continue in the path of the bottom pink one. rest are too squirrely strangers - too much stuff...white one is best i think. if it says "mers" then pull the S out from the R a bit.
there is no H... and you put it on a chicks tit, and it pumps out the milk, and puts it into a bottle for the kid.
he's talking about his piece i think...and if so why is there a condom? i wasnt talking about yours earlier. was refering to alts R. edit* some quick practice shit for class. [Broken External Image]:http://img130.imageshack.us/img130/7377/getattachmentdesign.jpg tryna break free of some of the bars and work with the shapes of the letters a little more. not real attatched to this one.