yea ik but i really want that style i will eventually get the hang of it but im not gonna if i dont keep trying

 

wanted to post sumthin......

 

wait... this is what i was doing but then YOU told me to do simples


VICE- that shit is all pretty sloppy. And that throw needs to changed a lot. Mostly just clean it all up, maybe stay with pencil for a while imo

 

Bump for crits

 

A356 you have some nice background goin on but your letter structure needs work..actually in the 2nd pic the letter aint too bad and match up

this is what i told you in the first place...let me expand on it..that london is T rash !! you have understanding of color shade etc. but the letter hurt big time
chop off all that stupid cuts n breaks n whatnot match the barwidth..id even fatten em up a lil , spacing and placing is good so far...well your overlapping is super gay..

for the 2nd piece. as i said, anint too bad overall, your letters aint beauty but they match up , i hate huge 3d.. now stop bumping

vise, it def. looks all shaky n shit, i love number 5..adorable robot..background n fills dont really contribute...oh didnt you say ull do me another exch??

 

ik thats what u were doing but u wernt going anywhere with it u have to get down and understand bars first. which happens by doing simples. u need to learn a lil more basics be4 trying 2 get a style all though i have no room to say any of this to but its just my opinion. do wat u want.

 

goya

 

in the bottom one the drop shadow needs to be the same for each letter. its hard to explain but imagine the light coming from top right. the shadow will be at the bootom left of each letter, you know what i mean?

 

yeah i got it now that you mention it, it does look weird.... its for my friends kid he wants me to do a canvas which ive never done, and he wants a robot theme...i dont know if that means robot style letters too

 

i would go for one of the top two. maybe the right

make it look all shiny and shit

 

Definately the one to the right or the 2nd row one but maybe take of the stars, clean shit yo

 

crits please?

 

cant really tell what it says b.c of the splatters, other than that it looks pretty dope. your 3-d is hot i dont really care for the blue boxes though.

 

it says AMERO. i dont know why i did the splatters lol, but thanks man

 

your name is very similar to mind.i dislike that...





















we must duel to the death for rights to names that are totally different yet similar in sound.ONGUARD!

 

your name is very similar to mind.i dislike that...





















we must duel to the death for rights to names that are totally different yet similar in sound.ONGUARD!

 

my name?..