I'm deff like the style of both of em. Real clean. Maybe could use a few more arrows they add mad style. and maybe a little more girth for inlyn's but nice, nice burners.
Thanks guys.. I was motivated by the recent interaction in this thread. Next hog will be STRAIGHT FIRE. Mad drips.. veins. Maybe a couple of pubes.. Hell yeah..
...you missed some numbers, next time you wanna cover that shit up so they cant trace where you painted it at.
[Broken External Image]:http://www.sanfranciscosentinel.com/wp-content/uploads/2009/06/head-scratch-2.jpg would you care to explain what that is exactly, chowdah?
Okay so i've been writing for nearly a month. This is the last piece that i did (2nd ever) View attachment 561339 and here is a bunch of shitty throw ups for people to pick apart View attachment 561340 View attachment 561341 View attachment 561342 View attachment 561343 View attachment 561344 This was my first ever experience writing with spraypaint on a wall.
and hopefully your last for a while.....get a note book a marker and some inspiration. you need to learn the basic elements of graff. your trying to hard to make it look urban and not trying to be rude but that name is super gay.
i wouldnt tell u to go buy a book or dvd to learn graffiti lol but u definitely need some basic letter structure down... and i wouldnt consider those throwups... they look like throwup though ;-)
lose the arrow I's and squash ur letters all together, try writing each letter it same and in the same style. and I get the name but it's a little redundant. like IS...IS it's a little weird. I dunno, it's okay but it will take a lot of work to make that word work. i would A) stop painting B) start drawing C) create an OG font AND TRACE a ton of other fonts. D) have fun but seriously use ur book for now. that shitty half wall might not get gone over right away but practicing painting is the least of ur concerns. i've seen ur shit around town, and i actually like the characters (a bit) but you really need to just draw. peace i actually have some ideas for ur word from looking at the band ISIS and there fonts and designs... it's also some greek godess!?!?
yall are bitches. dont believe the hype... [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos..._614860422759_13806028_35784360_1999646_n.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos..._614919733899_13806028_35785805_7865141_n.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://sphotos.ak.fbcdn.net/hphotos..._614860198209_13806028_35784355_8161009_n.jpg
That little green monster is cool shit. That's about it, mang. Paint bigger. That 'G' is kinda' weird in the top one. But is the bottom bar supposed to be big cause it's like a face? The green two piece is pretty clean. Hard lines with consistence widths. The fill is raw and the cuts on the low lights look good. The piece is by far the best of the three. Looks like you still got some work to do on that 3D? I've got a good feeling about the finished product. Your boy NEM has nice straights.