Kane- Personally, im diggin that green one. Mask- i guess like everyones syain, just tweak the k more, but you dont gotta change your name unless you want... Blar- That A looks gross with the tongue haha =D A new sorta blocky style im tryin, screwed up my shadows as usual, but im focusing on the letter structure Crits greatly appreciated
kane- the green one is pretty fresh mask- read last crit blar-pretty nice n simple sbal-s kind of resembles a 5 but other than that i think it has potential jus need to play with it [Broken External Image]:http://i276.photobucket.com/albums/kk21/jxpxbx22/hipeinblackbook.jpg
instead of that line in the middle try it off the side like in the pic and space out you M like you did here: Oh and: Sbal: Its getting better. Hipe: Um, there are much easier ways and better looking ways to do that throw, no offence, your h looks like an x, i know your trying to make a creative throw, but you don't have actual letters down yet, i would say start over but just fix that h and see what happends with it. Kane: Good throw, your e is a bit simple compared to the other letters Blar: I can't tell what that second letter is, the facial expression is kind of hiding the lines that define the letter.
Oh for some reason i was seeing an upper case A. you should lose that line that pops up in the middle of the e
View attachment 562919 still having trouble with the a.. get at me if you have any ideas. i tried working with a lowercase a but it still looks outta wack
yo mawk... heres how i would change it... u gotta clean it up a bit of course but a lowecase A like this and making ur K match the M a little more looks better, and it makes the K look less like an H
the 3d coming off that M.... turrible just turrible.... work on that part, i still dont like that K but its better
[Broken External Image]:http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/57/throwup2z.th.jpg Painted this one on top of an old store. It was dark and my friend kept on turning off the flashlight cause he was paranoid witch is why it sucks pretty bad. Some guy came after us once we were done too, it was kinda messed. [Broken External Image]:http://img411.imageshack.us/img411/3865/throwup3.th.jpg This one I painted on the old trailer in the woods again over my last one. I think its better than my last one but I messed up on the A and the fill wasn't as thick as I would want it to be. What you get with cheap paint I guess.